Tharish99 Thank you for your review. As promised, here's my opinion

  • Break down the paragraph for ease of reading flow.
  • Breakdown the dialogues
  • I do notice some minor mistakes. It doesn't really hinder reading as our brain would automatically find the correct word but if you need help with minor grammar/spellings and don't know how, try Grammarly. It's free.
  • Not sure if it's just me, but the mannerisms of the people when having a dialogue are almost the same for all.
  • I love how feisty and sarcastic the FL is. I do wonder why she was covered in eggs and flour in almost all baking classes? I mean, why aren't there any action considering its repetitive.

Cheers! x

      PerkyPompous_Pixie hii Thank u for ur opinion.. ❤❤
      I'm correcting some grammar issues and long paragraph issue these days..
      Btw I think you haven't got the point of 'baking class'. Please refer it again if u are intinterested.
      Good luck 👍

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          @Rin_Nurnia Mayline_Carraro I've reviewed your books, sorry for the delay 🙂

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