SaberKey I reviewed your book, I liked it a lot! Well done 😃

For anyone interested in doing a review swap with me, mine is here:

Storm Brewing / My Entry to the WSA 😃

Plot
Emma was always hyperactive and full of energy.
She loved the stories her Grandfather used to tell her when
she was little of fantastic beasts in the Dark Woods.
After he passes, she sets out on an adventure from the advice her Grandfather gave her when she was young. She finds out just how special she really is, and just how real her Grandfather's stories were.

    Tharish99 Thank you for your review. As promised, here's my opinion

    • Break down the paragraph for ease of reading flow.
    • Breakdown the dialogues
    • I do notice some minor mistakes. It doesn't really hinder reading as our brain would automatically find the correct word but if you need help with minor grammar/spellings and don't know how, try Grammarly. It's free.
    • Not sure if it's just me, but the mannerisms of the people when having a dialogue are almost the same for all.
    • I love how feisty and sarcastic the FL is. I do wonder why she was covered in eggs and flour in almost all baking classes? I mean, why aren't there any action considering its repetitive.

    Cheers! x

      PerkyPompous_Pixie hii Thank u for ur opinion.. ❤❤
      I'm correcting some grammar issues and long paragraph issue these days..
      Btw I think you haven't got the point of 'baking class'. Please refer it again if u are intinterested.
      Good luck 👍

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/23142693606361005/63936541394789098

      Here is the second chapter hope you will love it as well. Feel free to give your precious reviews and votes. add it in your library and share more, and Thank you so very much for your support in the previous chapter. It's really overwhelming.

      It will be very helpfull if someone can tell me how to share my book cover or new chapter link in forum, Cause I'm totally newbie here.

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