PerkyPompous_Pixie Thanks for being this constructive indeed, There's always something to improve
->Chapter 1 I tried to portray an intimidation game where he could do both, and where she would have the same punishment. A sort of puppet master later reflected in the prison he's in. (don't you like mind prisons? c🙂
->I do feel sorry for crowding the chapters so much, but since there's some action planned ahead, I am also in need of a base to contrast with.

hansora Thank you for your time! w

blossoms_hkhk Same goes for you, thanks for reading and the review!

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        When you type, look below. There's a eye shaped symbol and next to it, you could find 'format, pic & video guide". Tap it, it has instructions in clear detail...
        And I reviewed your book already. So, if you could, you can review mine🙂

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