_planetofzombies hey l've reviewed ur story... As l was the first one to do so and that's why l didn't point out ur negetive side there....
But here let me tell u that if u have given the chapters some nice and interesting name then readers will be more curious to read and also to know what gonna happened next.... So plzzz do give some nice and interesting names to ur chapters... Other then that everything is nice
https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305
Bu the way here is my story... Hope u gonna read some chalters and will give me a proper review....thank u....