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JustGoDie13 I hope you don't mind doing this one too.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-deal-with-the-deviless_23484173005821405
September 2021- Review Swap here!
BLACK_LIGHT_ what types of problems, did you talk about in my review??
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@BLACK_LIGHT_ Thank you, will get you back before the end of today
Maryam_Mayo
there were a few problems like in some places you lost the readers they don't know how did this happen and sometimes you were unable to describe completely what was happening. like how do I say it's like when you are creating a picture in your mind and suddenly you do not understand what is it the author is trying to say it changed somehow. I hope you get the gist of it.
Hi there, does anyone want to do a review swap? let me know! mine's here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-miracle-newbie-in-dreams-of-jianghu_24192109005648405
Maryam_Mayo also I uploaded my discord id you can ask me there too.
JulyFantasy hi there I will send my reviews after reading so I think I will be done by tomorrow. will send you my review then and if you want to read mine too this is the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-deal-with-the-deviless_23484173005821405
BLACK_LIGHT_ yes, I do agree, I uploaded first two chapters and thought that I might not get any views but with the passage of time, the readers increased, I tried to overcome my mistakes in other chapters, like I took the scenes from first chapter and tell the reason that why this happened.
Maryam_Mayo yeah I kinda noticed that while reading but the plot was finished in it also there is an option to edit your previous chapters.
BLACK_LIGHT_ Should I edit them?
Maryam_Mayo well, that depends on how long has it been since you uploaded them also doing now is not a good move. you should be careful in your next novel & chapters and you can use these tips & tricks. and let me know if you need help though I am new too. I might be able to help you to some extent
BLACK_LIGHT_ sure! thanks
BLACK_LIGHT_ hey there, thanks! i will read and review yours tomorrow too. getting pretty late here!
Maryam_Mayo hey there, i will let you know once I have reviewed your story 
will try to have it done by tomorrow!
BLACK_LIGHT_ https://www.webnovel.com/book/saikou-!_23539403705178305### aight here's mine, send me yours and ill do it once your review's in! thanks!