Hi everyone. I am writing my first book" Healing an illness". And I need reviews please, comments, thoughts, tips on how to improve. Please take a bit of your time to do this. I would appreciate it a lot

    Little_North_Star I review yours. It was good, but please work more on the characters and world background and any other small details.

      Is anyone up for a review swap? please, no more romance

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