Jhaydun I guess you can be as cruel or harsh as you want, but in the end, pls give me some support. I'll see what i can do for my review on yours. Thanks,

    Demons_and_I I read through five chapters, and it's not bad. There's a brilliant story there that you're trying to tell. You've got a lot of work to do to really make it shine, though. I've left a couple of comments and a review. Good luck!

      WritersBlocku - I'll get to your book tomorrow.
      And
      @GMSJakers - I'll get to yours the following day.

      Reading, commenting, and reviewing takes a lot out of me when I'm trying to consider how to constructively criticise the story. I hope you both don't mind waiting just a little bit longer.

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