Light_LOD

I'll make sure to do so, either sometimes this weekend or next week.

Happy writing.

      Demons_and_I
      Thank you bro...
      It was so harsh that I started to cry... XD,
      No, but for real thank you....
      Comments like this help in realizing your mistake and to not make them again.
      Some parts where you misunderstood the wordings I have indicated, but mostly you were correct..

          Demons_and_I
          Hey, it's done, I've read around 10 chapters but only commented for the first two.
          Don't worry you have good usage of words, it's just too good but your Grammar is just as bad.
          Sorry to tell this, I'm not talking about the spelling but the figures of speeches.
          The plot is very good. Improve your Grammar and your book just becomes unparalleled..

              Hydra_Gairum Sorry bro 🥲...
              I told you before hand that I was gonna be a little harsh. But you will definitely make progress. Just trust the process 😂👍

                Hydra_Gairum 🤦😂
                You just need to take what you read into context, and it will make sense to you. That's just the nature of the English language. And I only used figures of speech once or twice 🥲.

                We move 🏃🏃🏃

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