Faoziyat_O once you're done reviewing lemme know I'll do same with yours don't forget to leave few comments on chapters so ik you're reading

      AceAmbrosia Hey Ace, I have recently left a review of your story, but I would like to provide some critical feedback here so that I can share how I believe you can improve your book. To be honest, I didn't enjoy the first chapter much as it described events that I was not familiar with, and I initially felt that the book wasn't worth reading. However, from the first paragraph of the second chapter, I was completely hooked. The character development and story were both interesting to me from that point on.

      I would suggest working on Alex's thoughts and feelings a bit more and going into detail, such as when he first realized he had the opportunity to save his father. Adding details like his thoughts of being able to save him, feeling joy and hope, and then suddenly experiencing despair and hopelessness will create a powerful and impactful scene. This is just my opinion, but perhaps you could make the second chapter the first one somehow, as webnovel readers want something that grabs their attention.

      Overall, these are just suggestions, and you know better than me what works best for your book. Best of luck, and please keep me updated.

          acebellrain So Okay, I've posted a positive review of your book on the official website, but I'd like to give my critical feedback here. Firstly, I think the cover is good, and I'd give it a 3.5 out of 5. However, I believe that adding some monsters and making it darker with elements of blood, and even adding a girl to it, would make it more catchy, especially for WN readers. While your cover is classy, I think you have the potential to make it more eye-catching.

          Moving on to the synopsis, I think it's great and would give it a 5/5. Your writing style and grammar are awesome, and I'd rate it a 4.5/5. Lastly, the story, content, and plot are full of potential. You balanced emotions and thrills really well, and I loved the way you described Reimi's emotions. It made me feel concerned for her.

          However, I think updating is an issue. It would be better if you updated the chapters weekly instead of monthly, as I prefer to read a chapter weekly. Overall, the story and description are outstanding, and I'm sorry if I came across as negative. I just wanted to express my honest thoughts. Keep up the good work!"

              pink_lollie24 Hey greetings I've done reviewing your novel and left a positive review however the critical one will be here just for you as it doesn't concern readers much just affects them lol

              So. The story has a lot of potential, and I found the characters to be well-developed and distinct. Each character has their own unique voice, which is great. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. However, there are a few areas in the writing that could benefit from some updates. While the story is great, I noticed some minor issues with the writing style that could be addressed to improve the flow of the narrative. Despite this, I think the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments to the writing, it could be even better. Keep up the good work!

                  AbyssalVox I have posted my review of your book on the official website. However, I would like to give some critical feedback here as well. The cover of your book is nice, but it's not particularly catchy. I would suggest trying to make it more appealing and eye-catching. I would rate the cover 3.5 out of 5. As for the synopsis, I think it's solid and unique, so I would give it a rating of 4 out of 5.

                  Your storytelling and character development are exceptional, earning a solid 5 out of 5. You have truly excelled in these areas, and it shows in the quality of your writing. While there were a few minor grammar mistakes, they weren't major issues, and overall, your writing is fantastic. I didn't find many negative aspects in the book, and the positive factors outweigh any negatives. This is a rare find, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your book.

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