MagusBahaghari Done with the review! Your book is great and it has a lot of potential. I will definitely read your future updates!

Anyway, do you have any plans to sign your story for a contract? I know a reliable AE that can help you out.

    Idyllic_Scribe you know what? I am not interested in swapping with you. This is the reason why ask authors to review first.
    You didn’t read the book and still expect me to be honest? I saw that the comments you made in different chapters had 0 difference in time.
    I am not dumb enough to not understand that you didn’t read the book.
    It’s better if you would just delete your review.

      MagusBahaghari that's too long! Did you apply through inkstone? I am afraid you can only wait... But do you happen to have FB? Or discord? I will connect you to him for smoother conversation. So you can try to ask for a follow up if possible.

        RomanceFanatic028

        First off... no need to be rude. Second, I write my comments after I read the chapter. I wrote chapter comments for yours, sonce you has asked for them. I only noticed the reminder of the comments after reading, so I added them. Third, you wanted a review. That is what you got. I am honest with my reviews. I add critiques and compliments for the reviews. But, I am sorry if you found that the review was not to your standard. If you thought my review was going to be fake and all compliments, then no. I write 5 stars for people who deserve it

          Sorry for being rude but quit lying. I am very open towards criticism, but your review didn’t even made sense. You wanted me to show not tell? What did you wanted me to show? Those thing you mentioned was my character’s trait. You wanted me to write whole flashback to show it?

          And you are saying that you commented after reading the reminder. But for reading you need to click the link first. Don’t tell me you didn’t read “I need comments” which was right above the link.

          I don’t write this big comment usually, but you are portraying me as a bad guy. My book might not deserve 5 star rating, but it doesn’t deserve 3 and half for sure.

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