Sorry for being rude but quit lying. I am very open towards criticism, but your review didn’t even made sense. You wanted me to show not tell? What did you wanted me to show? Those thing you mentioned was my character’s trait. You wanted me to write whole flashback to show it?
And you are saying that you commented after reading the reminder. But for reading you need to click the link first. Don’t tell me you didn’t read “I need comments” which was right above the link.
I don’t write this big comment usually, but you are portraying me as a bad guy. My book might not deserve 5 star rating, but it doesn’t deserve 3 and half for sure.