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Yes. Thank you! I will get to it very shortly. I am trying to get my next book ready to put up. I don't mind doing my review first, but please do mine after. I don't think everyone is doing that, but it may just be taking some time. Lol. My book is kind of dark, but is definitely a story of strength and redemption. I hope you like it. I will let you know as soon as I am finished with the reviews. I usually leave chapter comments, as well.

    Idyllic_Scribe I have posted comments on certain paragraphs on certain chapters. I don't really see them as negative. Perhaps, others might that you may be compelled to edit them. But what I notice is that you shortened the very long paragraphs when I first read it. Also, there are parts in paragraphs that you may have to separate/splice, hehehe. It's up to you though.

    And regarding characters, Bai Yihan is interesting. I haven't really quite figured out his personality.

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