MagusBahaghari thank you! Are there any negatives you have found in the story? Is it a good hook?
September 2021- Review Swap here!
Yes. Thank you! I will get to it very shortly. I am trying to get my next book ready to put up. I don't mind doing my review first, but please do mine after. I don't think everyone is doing that, but it may just be taking some time. Lol. My book is kind of dark, but is definitely a story of strength and redemption. I hope you like it. I will let you know as soon as I am finished with the reviews. I usually leave chapter comments, as well.
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Idyllic_Scribe I have posted comments on certain paragraphs on certain chapters. I don't really see them as negative. Perhaps, others might that you may be compelled to edit them. But what I notice is that you shortened the very long paragraphs when I first read it. Also, there are parts in paragraphs that you may have to separate/splice, hehehe. It's up to you though.
And regarding characters, Bai Yihan is interesting. I haven't really quite figured out his personality.
NinaChroni Hi! Would you like to review swap and exchange comments? If so, please reply and send me your link, thanks! Here’s my link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/travesty-of-1959_26147833805198705
NinaChroni Thank you for the review 
Will review it by positively tomorrow.
Awesome, thank you.
eudine hey yes absolutely I would love to. Realistically I won't be able to get to it till tomorrow because I spent the day getting in my own way LOL as far as my books go I'm about to in a little bit post my second book so you actually have some options. You can either review the sci-fi fantasy which I've been told is the dark book or a hybrid demon killer which is a little lighter of a read just let me know which one and I'll give you the link. I look forward to reading your book!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26284592705629105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4324241050
I also will like a review on my work …. And wouldn’t gladly swap
MagusBahaghari oh alright! Great! Thanks!
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eudine
Here is my link...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/26056616506091505
Might sound a little greedy, but a minimum of seven chapters before reviewing will be appreciated
Will do the same.
GMSJakers
NinaChroni hey, I haven't forgotten about . Things have gone crazy on me I I got two new clients and I'm trying to get this other book posted. had way more corrections I needed to do than I anticipated. I know I said I would get to it yesterday and I I apologize but I promise I will get your review done today and I do apologize.
Mi_22 No worries! I’ll get to your book in an hour or two when I’m free, here’s my link, please let me know once you’ve left a review:
https://m.webnovel.com/book/travesty-of-1959_26147833805198705
NinaChroni Ooh please do send me the link to the dark sci-fi/fantasy one, I look forward to reading and reviewing it! I’ll try and leave a review within 12 hours after you send me the link; when you’ve reviewed mine, please let me know, thanks!
Looking for a review swap, after the prologue of my story https://m.webnovel.com/book/elysium-soul-reckoning_26141078306410805
Mi_22 Sorry, took me awhile to do review, but I did it. I was reading it slowly cause I really do enjoy it, I'll reward it with gt so don't be surprised.