I'm up for swaps again. Decided to go for the WPC this time, at the last moment.
I'll give you my honest thoughts assuming you do the same.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/conquering-space-with-my-licking-system_22618834705445405

002_Yuki_Onna Hi! I'm up to swap honest reviews.

Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/royal-survival_22559558306333805

lala_sanara Let's swap please add my to your library will do the same and add a few chapter comments https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21487187806657405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4318928666

[unknown] you want to swap?

lala_sanara I had some free time, so I ended up reading your novel anyway. It was good. The plot, the pacing, good. The grammar though could be better. And you left out important details like where what scene was taking place.
but that being said, the plot was good and you'd probably be fine with an edit. I wish you good luck.
here's mine btw,
https://www.webnovel.com/book/conquering-space-with-my-licking-system_22618834705445405/prologue_60716995255007285

Nr_Yet1208 Oh thank you for the advice and review, it will surely help me a lot in editing my work. I will review yours now as well.

Rayne_Rue sure, let's review swap.

Hey everyone, this is my first released novel. It has 6 chapters so far with about 2 chapters becoming available a week. If you read please leave a review and some constructive criticism if you can. Give me time to actually read your stories and I will also leave a review and some tips. Thank you!

Link: King Fool NEW CHAPTER

Fixated on stories of magic since a young child, King Lonson VI of Oates sets out on an expedition to find it. But....his undying obsession may lead to his death along with the downfall the Oates Kingdom.
"...But magic must exist! How else can we explain the unexplainable?"

HeziTheGreat Hey, I'll give it a read

lala_sanara I would love to do an honest review swap! https://www.webnovel.com/book/complete-silence_22534123106123805

senshiAuthor Thank you so much. I wish you the greatest of achievements in yours.

Rayne_Rue Sure. Why not?
Here's my link. https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22596612005311005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4309104437

You can send yours.

Nr_Yet1208 wanna swap https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22525765406098105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310183235 leave yours in the reply

Saher_Abidi sure
https://www.webnovel.com/book/conquering-space-with-my-licking-system_22618834705445405

Rayne_Rue ok sure! Id love to!

Saher_Abidi Done. Good plot but you should focus a bit more on style and grammar. You have way too many continuous sentences going. It could be a preference but to me that kind of ruined the fun of reading. I wish you good luck in editing.

pedro_corti done

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A very interesting storyyy Read it guys!!

Synopsis
From time immemorial, angels are considered a more perfect beings than human, they are not influenced by the rationality that humans possess. In fact, they think more intellectually in every decision, making them incapable of making sins. One day, in an unknown reason, something cause a change in the heart of some angels that led to one of the biggest chaos in heavenly realm. After the great turmoil, the angels that cause mayhem were thrown down in the mortal land. After many years, these fallen angels build their own kingdoms, building and searching for more power again for the second war. What will be their destiny in the mortal world? What another pandemonium would they bring to this land?