Jia_K Review posted and collection added. In order to help you in your endeavor for the contest I suggest rewriting the first 3 chapters in the style you used for the rest of the 29 chapters. Good work!
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DarkElven6 I'd like to ask this so that I don't send an invalid request per se: If my story is categorized under LGBT+ but is otherwise a Fantasy Romance (just with two girls as the main pairing), would you be willing to read it? It fits all the other requirements, but I can understand if you wouldn't want to. I just wasn't sure if you were counting it as a separate category.
Regardless of the answer, thank you for doing this for authors! These kinds of things are very helpful! :D
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20487494906949305
Title; Yanderes: The Harem Of The Luckless Man From The Earth
Have about 32 chaps and yet to sign the contract...
Thanks in advance...
DarkElven6 Thanks for the offer mate will appreciate a genuine review.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tales-of-the-dragon-sovereign_20759706406718505
P.S it has Chinese names so that may or may not be your thing.
Selene97 Nice cover
Wow! Thanks for the offer, dear. Here is mine. It just scraped by the length requirement. It also has a setting of system/Fantasy genre.
Title: The Elusive Book Keeper
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Synopsis; The creature chuckled, his voice echoing within the empty walls.
"What do you wish for? Youth, Immortality, Wealth, Power? You can be the one above all, I can make you Heaven's favoured child."
His voice was bewitching, tempting one to the depths of hell..........
Zane looked up, his eyes spoke of deep and suffocating emotions, "I will rather the heavens forget me instead."
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511
DarkElven6 I think I meet the criteria, except I am contracted, is that a no go?
Heh, I manage to check all the boxes apart from Fantasy and Games.
So: In the order of half a million words, not contracted, proofread twice (some errors are bound to remain though) and I'm an English minor as well as an MA Comp Lit, Sci Fi isekai (since when are people only allowed to pop worlds by means of magic?), Teen Romance (kind of -- makes more sense if you read it), set in a version of contemporary Tokyo, so not exactly my own world building, most definitely a lot of slice of life.
Basically an aggregate of (almost) seven LN high school romance series. My own original though, so not as heavy on dialogue as your average LN. It's very slow, slice of life and all that, and I'm running with an ensemble cast, which is an immediate dealbreaker for some readers who need one main character.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/transition-and-restart_12652502605368205
Put it last in your queue. I've already received my fair share of reviews, swaps included. Also, real life occured. I've left it hanging for a year or so. Need to clean up RL before I have time to write the finishing five volumes.
Hi, yes, I saw your review and LOVED IT. Thanks for the advice, I will work on the chapters.
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Title: System Only Gives Me Useless Gifts
Synopsis: Li Yun grew up with a system that gave him useless gifts. He wanted a reward that could prove the existence of the system, but ended up with abstract gifts like culture. Without physical proof, he was stuck wondering whether his mind was truly sane, all the while dealing with the reality of life.
The novel is Low-Fantasy/Slice of Life/Romance set in modern times. It has a lot of modern webnovel elements like system, cultivation, medical drama, treasure hunting, detective, and the kitchen sink (cooking.)
I have 6 reviews... 2 of them out of pity. I technically have 8, but one is spam and one is shadow banned for using a curse word... sigh.... I just need 4 more honest reviews. I don't like to ask for review swap either.
Thank you for this!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/system-only-gives-me-useless-gifts_20245142505428805
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Woa, I see that you're swamped with replies and I don't know whether your offer is still up, but if you do have the time, do you mind giving my novel a go? I'd really like some honest feedback from people who didn't just scroll through the chapters with their eyes closed.
The genre is fantasy, romance, and comedy. It's also a quick transmigration story which I don't know whether it would be your cup of tea.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/quick-transmigration-the-day-i-blew-up-my-housemate_20874477906948605
A fair warning though, the writing style I adopted is a bit... easterncentric. Especially the first arc which has a historical palace intrigue setting.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19386459505180005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316075578
Hello want to do mine?
Title: Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge
Chapter - 80+, updates everyday, and post 2-3 chapters/week
Genre: Fantasy, Harem, Historical, and Magic.
FEW WARNINGS ABOUT MY BOOK (My story uses real life religion, story, and Mythologies as characters, so I hope I won't offend you if you're religious. And my story is now getting r18 in the newer chapters.)
Advice that I need: I want to know if my characters, world-building, and plot are good. Also, since English is not my first language, I would like some advice in what English words are better to use.
Google pays 390$ reliably. My last paycheck was $55000 working 10 hours out of consistently on the web. My increasingly youthful kinfolk mate has been averaging 20k all through continuous months and he works around 24 hours reliably. I can't trust how direct it was once I attempted it out. This is my essential concern...:) For more info visit any tab on this site Thanks a lot GOOD LUCK......http://moneystar5.cf/
Google pays 390$ reliably. My last paycheck was $55000 working 10 hours out of consistently on the web. My increasingly youthful kinfolk mate has been averaging 20k all through continuous months and he works around 24 hours reliably. I can't trust how direct it was once I attempted it out. This is my essential concern...:) For more info visit any tab on this site Thanks a lot GOOD LUCK......http://moneystar5.cf/
DarkElven6 Hi, first of all, thank you so much for the efforts you are putting in to help the novice writers
And now I'll get to the point,
My book comes under 'romance' category and I've published 21 chapters so far. And I hope it fulfills all the conditions you have wrote there...
The name of my book is 'His Ruthless Ex Wife'
Here is the link,
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20603926206104305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317763769
It would be great if you can have a look and provide me some suggestions :)
DarkElven6 Hello, thanks for going out of your way to do this. Can you help review my story, it's called Cross Heart Adventurers and a fantasy novel. Can't wait for your reviews and hope you continue reading.
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/b8fzfFb
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DarkElven6
Hey, it's only 16 chapters but the words are above 24K. Hope, you review mine...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-under-the-name-of-god_20483981006913205
Edit: sorry, just got contracted. Read your conditions, you can ignore my request (but I'm not deleting it, hoping you may try reading it)
DarkElven6
I'd appreciate some proper feedback. On the review swap threads, people just give you generic compliments or point out generic mistakes. I know I'm guilty of this myself. Sometimes you just want some honest critique, what someone actually thinks of your story.
So, in short, I'd love it if you would give me some insightful feedback.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rites-of-consecration_21000630806863105
My novel doesn't have 20 chapters but it has 34K words.
Selene97 It has been a long time since a Dark Fantasy novel has pulled me in like this story. I will be adding this to my library as I patiently wait for chapter 43 onwards. I am sorry it took me so long to do your review but I have my own stories and 200k+ words is a lot, even for someone who reads like I do.
I will say that I spent several days and hours completely enthralled in this story. You can read the rest in my review. I don't usually give such high marks, but I truly enjoyed the experience of reading your story. I will also be angry if I have to wait long periods, please don't disappoint me.
Scientist_113 I have previously left a review for this novel. Let me know again if you work on this fixes I mentioned.