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DarkElven6
- Oct 20, 2023
- Joined Jan 8, 2020
Rielen
Fantasy/Romance
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rielen_15841779406220805Rielen is a chosen mage of the Autra Kingdom. She must leave her family, her childhood friend Eon, and her town behind to be in service to the Kingdom. Just when she feels as if she will lose all hope she finds Eon has arrived too. Her joy of their reunion is cut short by the rules of the Academy and the role female mages play in the kingdom. Fighting for her independence leads her to the truth of the world and the danger that it faces. The spirit world is dying and she is chosen to save it. After a contract is drawn up with the spirits, Rielen must face a mysterious organization, many trials as the new leader of her Kingdom, and her relationship with Eon.
Rielen
Fantasy/Romance
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rielen_15841779406220805Synopsis: Rielen is a chosen mage of the Autra Kingdom. She must leave her family, her childhood friend Eon, and her town behind to be in service to the Kingdom. Just when she feels as if she will lose all hope she finds Eon has arrived too. Her joy of their reunion is cut short by the rules of the Academy and the role female mages play in the kingdom. Fighting for her independence leads her to the truth of the world and the danger that it faces. The spirit world is dying and she is chosen to save it. After a contract is drawn up with the spirits, Rielen must face a mysterious organization, many trials as the new leader of her Kingdom, and her relationship with Eon.
Fantasy/Romance Rielen
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rielen_15841779406220805Vam_V I just posted my review for your story. Writing style needs some work, but I can see your story being popular. Look into some of the content WN has released to help new authors.
Vam_V Sorry its taken me awhile to read this. I had to stockpile some of my own chapters and IRL keeps kicking in. I am currently reading your story and enjoying it. Will take me awhile to get caught up but I will review it honestly on the website!!!! : )
dreamver2 yuri is definitely not my favorite but I will review it honestly since you were upfront about it.
KayLillyt_1 I read up until the locked chapters. In the future I would advise shorter paragraphs to make the story easier to read.
Scientist_113 I have previously left a review for this novel. Let me know again if you work on this fixes I mentioned.
Selene97 It has been a long time since a Dark Fantasy novel has pulled me in like this story. I will be adding this to my library as I patiently wait for chapter 43 onwards. I am sorry it took me so long to do your review but I have my own stories and 200k+ words is a lot, even for someone who reads like I do.
I will say that I spent several days and hours completely enthralled in this story. You can read the rest in my review. I don't usually give such high marks, but I truly enjoyed the experience of reading your story. I will also be angry if I have to wait long periods, please don't disappoint me.
Jia_K Review posted and collection added. In order to help you in your endeavor for the contest I suggest rewriting the first 3 chapters in the style you used for the rest of the 29 chapters. Good work!
In a World With Magic: Rielen's Story
Fantasy/RomanceRielen is chosen as a magic user in the Kingdom of Autra. This means being taken from the one she loves and her family to the Royal Capital. What will become of Rielen and what does it mean to be selected? Join Rielen on her journey as a new mage in the Kingdom of Autra
https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-a-world-with-magic-rielen%E2%80%99s-story_15841779406220805
- Edited
Hello,
As I hate the practice of Review Swapping, I am going to review some novels for those struggling. I will be completely honest. I will only add your story to my library if I genuinely want to read it more later. However, I am not going to read things I hate so I will have some requirements.
-Your novel must have at minimum 20 chapters or 20,000 words.
-You do not already have a contract with Web Novel and just need honest reviews to help your story.
-You have made a genuine effort to fix grammar/spelling mistakes. (i.e. running it through a word processor like Microsoft Word/Google Sheets)
-You are writing a novel in one of the below genres:
Fantasy (Romance, Isekai, Reincarnation, System, Magic, Slice of Life, Harem)
Romance - if your writing in this genre you better have some character development!
World Building - Do I even need to explain this?
Slice of Life - Sometimes you just need good vibes.
Teen - Give me something exciting
Games - Not just a subject for the guys!
Sci-fi - Cause why does a story always got to be on some world out there!I am sure there are others who will look at this post and think this is great how about I go look at the submissions here as well! Good. Post your honest opinions on the stories themselves not here on the forum. If you liked the story, like the submission.
Also for some reason my name never changed in the Forums but I go by DarkElven6 now. Let's read some stories!
I will now be posting my replies on my Discord https://discord.gg/6Xs8JKz5
Update: Yes, I am still taking requests and if you have changed your stories from my initial review repost them. I will be reviewing based on first post, first serve so be patient. I am also an author and have a regular game schedule and other responsibilities. I am building a community and will be posting your reviews in my newly created Discord (link above).
Adding to my list. Thanks for having more than 3 chapters : )
https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-a-world-with-magic-rielen%E2%80%99s-story_15841779406220805
Name: In a World With Magic: Rielen's Story
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Synopsis: Rielen is chosen as a magic user in the Kingdom of Autra. This means being taken from the one she loves and her family to the Royal Capital. What will become of Rielen and what does it mean to be selected? Join Rielen on her journey as a new mage in the Kingdom of Autra.This is the story I have chosen daily updates for. Please give me an honest review if this fits within the genres you read! : )
bluerat How do you get the descriptions to display? Mine show a forever loading screen.
Honestly I don't really expect much until I have reached at least 50 chapters. I am thankful for those that jump on early though. I personally hate review swapping because I end up with topics that I hate... And yeah not everyone wants to read fantasy/romance that I happen to write....