Hey man, I am looking for some helpful and constructive criticism and advice(not a total swap)
My novel is called “Enter the End” and is a reincarnation fantasy novel.
Read here:
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21879050306351805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319484648
https://www.webnovel.com/book/two-queens-and-death_20665771805526005 open here for you, let's review each other's work...
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JamisonNilsson
Hello Jamison...um...well...I started writing this book too. I'm not sure if it's good enough though 
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21333670106209805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314601880
Hey Guys just started writing.
Although im not confident enough give it a try.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/trails-of-genesis_21774678905641305
And if you like please review
JamisonNilsson
Hi I reviewed yours. Really good. Gave some feedback. Mind giving for me too. Also constructive and honest criticism
https://www.webnovel.com/book/eepos-from-rags-to-godhood_21807346005784005
AlexanderCao you got it bro
azunaima hey I’ll be sure to leave a proper review but might I just suggest editing part of your writing here and there, a lot of it seems jumbled up and hard to read. <3
Vikram_Veer
Dude!
Your ideas amazing 
keep writing...
JamisonNilsson
Okay thanks 
azunaima
Thank you for your support.
There are a few problems and confusion with the initial chapter.
Ill try to fix it in time so you can look forward to it.
Mine is a western magic fantasy-based novel. A priest with his guardian knights versus the undead evil creature.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/%5Bbl%5D-priest-and-his-guardian-knights_21592091706992805
DymenS Sorry. I'm back just a while ago? How's your writing?
DsDMonumental Give me your link so we can swap. I just posted 10 chaps just a while ago.
DsDMonumental I'm writing a fantasy. Kindly read and review with honest opinion please.... :)
TeodoraK Hi. Let's swap if you want :)
DsDMonumental Yes, well said. Thanks. I love honest review... :)
Is anyone interested in doing a swap review with me? Mine is about game fantasy, and I will also really appreciate it if we criticize each other or provide input on each other's reviews, here is my story:
