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I will tell you how I am slowly revising my story.

  1. first of all it was all about how to end my book. So, I quickly wrote down an outline.
  2. then I started putting up details.
  3. once my story was done. I began correcting according to the readers' advice.
  4. But the final touch is - sensory touch. What can my story show to my readers? This is imagery. Is there any scent in my story? the feelings from tongue or skin...taste or sensory feelings from touch etc.? Can my reader feel anything from my story?
    It's like adding more visuals, scent, taste, emotion, color, etc. in the environment of the story.

I believe you can understand from here, what you can do more about your story, right?

You can read my first chapter...I am currently updating its details. You will feel some changes. I added taste in the first scene where Tom is being thrown from the Rooftop...can you detect what the change of taste is? let me know there with comment. If you find it, you will understand what you need to change in your story too. I will keep giving you my thoughts slowly but first before you move to the 2nd season, make the first one complete, please.

    xish101 hahaha..life is short and I can't break my promise..so, if you don't hear from me for a long time..then it means I am either gone or in the process... 😃

      Penality hello!! I have reviewed your book. Your book is good study material for writers. Wonderful narrative style. I always feel jealous when I see writing like this...because I cannot write the same...it's a regret of mine. Please, collection, comment, and review swaps.
      I have a finished book waiting for review from the New Friends:
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/tom-in-an-rpg-world-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
      And this is the new book that awaits reviews and comments and collections from everyone:
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505

        Dark_Ember_7708 Hi, I will do yours..here are my books. Please, collect, comment and review.
        I have a finished book waiting for review from the New Friends:
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/tom-in-an-rpg-world-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
        And this is the new book that awaits reviews and comments and collections from everyone:
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505

            Sam_OverPowered hello!! I have reviewed your book.
            Please, collection, comment, and review swaps.
            I have a finished book waiting for review from the New Friends:
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/tom-in-an-rpg-world-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
            And this is the new book that awaits reviews and comments and collections from everyone:
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505

                Hello? Did you like books like Grandmaster Of Demonic Cultivation,The Husky And His White Cat Shizun, or Black Moonlight Holds The BE? Well then I've got the perfect book for you c:

                Title: Master Of The Night Wanderers

                Synopsis: I had one goal! Just one!
                Survive the horrific Liu Bai He Clan for 6 months!!!! After that, back to being a slack-off!
                So how the hell did I get here???
                And why are there so many beautiful men around me?!

                My heart!!!!!

                As soon as Ba Yihan arrived Liu Bai He Clan, a cultivation group known for their elegance and proper training, he had one idea. Lay low, hide in the shadows, and at all costs; DO NOT GET NOTICED!! However, those close to him realize how similar Ba Yihan is to the demonic and horrific, Blind Tyrant, a human that turned his own back on humanity for the sake of homicidal demons.

                But, it did not take long for Ba Yihan to get curious enough to read about the secretive Blind Tyrant, and not only did he read, but he discovered. Though, it wasn't on how horrific, frightful, and murderous the man was. Instead, it was how... smart he was. Ba Yihan wanted to walk down the same path the Blind Tyrant had strutted on (and not end up dead).

                Ba Yihan just needed to do it the right way.

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                  Rarajasmin_jazz Hey! I just updated the chapters Meet the Bakers, Rooftom Brawl, Cacey's Last Days of Bravery 2, and Distraught Janis...
                  Now, you will see the weather of Ayodale and how it affected the above-mentioned chapters' reading experience.
                  Maybe you can experience something new or shed some light?
                  Thanks.
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                    Name :Grifters On The Melancholy Night (grifyo)
                    Genre: action, comedy, slice of life
                    Basically it’s a urban fantasy

                    Rarajasmin_jazz congrats!!! Read it...This cannot be the last...I suggest you take it and see how it goes.
                    But did you apply or did they notify you? How did the contract reach you?
                    Amazing! You got a contract within 27 days of publishing!!! By the way, do you have to sign it right away? I would suggest, reading it, then keeping it. Finish the novel first. It's going to be a difficult thing to do. So, finish the first draft. Then let us read it and then you can revise and update until you are satisfied. Then apply for the contract and lock your chapters. Then keep promoting.
                    If this becomes successful, then you can start writing even more projects. But I am so jealous!!! Perhaps, they sign romance and teen novels more!!! But I lack the heart to write romance...it has become dry and black...and it can only bleed adventure and action and gruesome death. 😃

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