I'm pretty interested to see how you would analyze my action sci-fi novel.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
I'll sent you the friend request from my discord to discuss it further. If you had a time or could.
Done.
I think it'll be better if you do lots of rephrasing with some rephrasing website like Quillbot/ProWritingAid to make some sentence felt better to read.
In which means, it should be slightly complex, but easy to understand.
And with some advices I've give on every paragraphs' comments, hope this'll help.
Or maybe, we could beta read each other for more, or even as crazy as discussing our book in our discord's DM.
The contract was slightlt shady imo. In which I don't want if Webnovel took over my ownership of my book.
I would love to beta read your book where I'll give some comments, feedbacks, and even review. But if you don't mind an Action Sci-Fi with lots of action scene, you would love this book.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
Would you do mine after I've commented and reviewed your book?
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
"Mankind is dying, disorders are kings, and heaven copulate hell."
Content Warning: This novel contain explicit contents of violences, gores, profanities, drug uses, and slight sexualities.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
I would love too. And you could do mine after I've commented/reviewed several chapter of your book titled "Taming Mr Haden".
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
"Mankind is dying, disorders are kings, and heaven copulate hell."
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
If you wanted to read something "Different" might as well give this book a try.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
"Mankind is dying, disorders are kings, and heaven copulate hell."
Content Warning: This novel contain explicit contents of violences, gores, profanities, drug uses, and some sexualities.
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22073496706380905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409
If you don't mind fantasy sci-fi with an "edge of your seat" action, give this book a try.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
"Mankind is dying, disorders are kings, and heaven copulate hell."
Content Warning: This novel contain explicit contents of violences, gores, profanities, drug uses, and some sexualities.
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22073496706380905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409
Ultra Punishing Automata May Cry Revengeance.
You make a Sci-Fi book? I think you would giving this book a try.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
To put it simply:
"This book's interesting because my story is all about bla bla bla, the character is bla bla bla, the world building, and many more which could makes the reader investing on my story even more!"
I hope this'll help.
I would like to. And here's my book, if you have a time.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Genre: Action Sci-Fi
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22073496706380905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409
Synopsis:
The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.
The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.
They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.
And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.
Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.
"Mankind is dying, disorders are kings, and heaven copulate hell."
I would like too.
Title: Blackstorm
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23660804606300805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409
Marketability. Period.
Edit: But it all came down for your own preferences. Where if you don't like Cultivation, Reincarnation, Harem, and System, you can just find another which doesn't including these title.
Or, even better, you could make a novel of your own and publish it which aren't including these tags.
Hope this'll help.
I've put a review on your book. And my greatest apology if I sounded harsh, because the way I judge a book is how good the 1st chapter are.
And if I was 100% click with it, I'm digging in, and so does the opposite.
You can do mine if you had times. Maybe do the same thing as I was.
If you don't mind an Action Sci-Fi, might as well give this book a try.
Title: Scorching Black Vulture
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22073496706380905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409
If you don't mine an Action Sci-Fi novel which are rich on action sequences, might as well give this book a try.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22073496706380905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317578409