Hi, new author here. Tried a few fanfictions before trying to start my own original novel. Still though, it seems that getting views on fanfictions is easier than on novels. If there is an experienced author here, or anyone really, I just need an honest review to try and better my writing.

The name of my novel is :Reylan Emberblade: A Journey Through life.

Thank you in advance for any advice or any tips you can give me.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/reylan-emberblade-a-journey-through-life_27310405306355505

    LegitHuman I'd like to to check it out please see mine too. Here's the title: Scarlet Lockwood " yes her wears the trousers but I control the zipper"

      LegitHuman You're on track. I tried leaving a comment but it looks like you have but the other webnovel. Your book has a straight storyline from description to characters. You're direct and I love how you don't use too much words to explain certain things

          Hello! I'm a new author here.
          I currently working on my book called,
          Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue
          https://m.webnovel.com/book/crescent-veil-chronicles-of-intrigue_26674737806125605

          The genre is adventure, mystery, and magic.
          Lord of Mystery is my favorite book and I took quite inspiration from that.
          I hope you guys could try to read my book when you have time.
          I want a chapter comment instead of review. But if you leave review much appreciate it. I have 5 chapter currently, if you do all 5. I'll also do all your first 5 chapters.
          Thank you🍀

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