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"You and I need to declare to them that we are dating."

  • Teen/Drama. Going through their inner problems, they are looking for peace to feel real. It so happens that they find themselves in the same literary club, and their lives begin to gradually change.

  • If you enjoy dramas with elements of psychology brought to the storyline about several students from Tokyo, this will suit you just fine.

"Why does one's happiness not return with a coin…? Why should I endure it for more than a decade? Did I do something wrong?" she said quietly, leaning on her knees.

It was the cycle of her life.

Link: Over the Bridges to Singing Waterfalls

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    Hey guys and gals and anything in between! I've been getting back into writing on the platform recently and have been itching for some feedback.

    The name of my novel is: Infinite Evolution in The Apocalypse
    I made it about 6 days ago though it already has 16 chaps and 25K words so its decently long as of the time I am writing this. The link is at the end of this reply so if you want to give it a try go ahead and head over.

    Infinite Evolution in The Apocalypse:
    The apocalypse is hard to survive in but Lucas Walker would say it was impossible. Having been thrown into the apocalypse from a long-deserved nap Lucas finds himself in a hell hole that is the apocalypse. Beasts of horrifying strength are everywhere and portals to other worlds have opened leaking strange energies and beings from them. With everyone in the world in chaos will Lucas be able to survive with the special class he received from the system that everyone has?

    My book is effectively a system/litrpg book that I have written that the basis of is that the world has gone to hell and everyone has gotten a system so that they can grow stronger. The main character has a unique class that no one else has though others like him are all across the world. Will Lucas have what it takes to become the strongest? Will he be able to conquer the demons in his heart and become the person he always dreamed of being? All these things will be answered on the next episode of Dragon Ball Z!

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/infinite-evolution-in-the-apocalypse_22542171906182905

      PhoenixWriter I posted above! I will review your book or at least the first few chaps if its super long. (Like 20+ chaps). I hope you will honestly review mine! I could really use some constructive criticism.

          Review swap anyone?

          If you have Discord please hit me up at yuchensky#9155. I tend to forget to check back
          This is a fast paced rebirth/second chance CEO Romance.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/22331987006940705

          When the fox spirit Fengxi's immortal lover reaches the end of his lifespan, she made the ultimate decision to follow him in death. But just when she thought she had died, she wakes in the body of Feng Xia, a woman from the twenty-first century.
          With her memories of the past jumbled with Feng Xia's memories, Fengxi must do what it takes to discover the reason for her rebirth: even if it means signing a contract with Tong Yue, the CEO that Feng Xia spent a day with before she was reborn in her body, a memory of which Fengxi cannot recall at all.
          But when she meets Feng Xia's uncaring parents and a man claiming to be Feng Xia's fiance, and learns from Tong Yue that Feng Xia is a pawn of her parents' bigger plans, Fengxi has to discover what is behind that deleted memory and what drove Feng Xia to spend a day with Tong Yue.
          Is Tong Yue really her lover reborn, or was Fengxi the one reborn to continue their unfinished story? Why was that memory deleted?

          Note: the synopsis is based on the beginning chapters and not the entire story.

            PhoenixWriter Thank you! I saw you already commented on a couple of chaps! I will get to reading yours right now.

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