Tomoyuki
No senpai
I don't want to do something that's not allowed now that I know. (Thinking of removing the post itself but I got to learn so much and it will look weird without context )
I just see and learn never read the rules
I will improve my synopsis and make less errors.
Thanks for all the valuable feedbacks the recent ones were really helpful!
I will work on the synopsis and better choice of words thank you for the help senpai.
I was trying to spread positivity that's why I wrote soul stirring but my entire novel is not inspiring there are evil people who wins too so I that was the only reason I choose that word 
But my synopsis do mentions the protagonists name - it's Thea.
Recently I have added the prologue because I thought one should know there will be gruesome deaths ahead but I guess that's turning into more misleading stuff.
Tomoyuki
I didn't know that it's not allowed to do self promotion thanks for telling it
And about grammatical errors in the book most of it is clarified maybe I did some typo in the post
The point is who they are fighting I can't reveal in my synopsis that's the whole story about finding who is behind it all
And about strong characters and world building I thought of writing it because many top writers did so I thought I too need to because some people like quick reads and less world build up stuff
And also about strong characters I wanted to convey that I don't write characters just for fillers.
So how can I convey what the readers should expect?
I wrote exactly what I thought I was writing
slow burn
strong characters (most of them are...None were added for filler)
i write long descriptions about world
But I guess it's getting confusing for many
Thanks alot for pointing out what you felt and I will like to change it
The only thing I felt bad was before starting to write I read your comments in posts that how you never gave up...so I was inspired
The comment seemed demotivating something I never thought would come from you
Oh by the way my last few chapters deal with mental health so I wrote will stir your soul because it's kinda a sensitive topic.
Have you read the story then you might have understood why I wrote soul stirring and the message I wanted to convey for all who suffer from loneliness.
Thank you for the elaborate feedback
Uggh just found out a few months back Senpai used to receive comments where he was asked to leave writing by his fellow readers(even though he got amazing grammar) and now senpai instead of helping demotivates others... hmmmm.
Then what happened Senpai did you improve or only your toxic criticism trait did towards newbies?
P.S. There's a thin line of difference between feedback and demotivating others one should learn that... Some amazing writers have given me feedback and helped me to improve I still have those comments so when I improve I can go back and reflect.
Tomoyuki
You have not read it
because I corrected most of it... you just read the old feedbacks
P.S. there still can be typos and punctuation problems here and there but I can firmly say it's readable.
If you are a grammar nazi and want to help then you can go ahead and comment on my novel chapter... Thanks in advance.
[Player: Human Female]
cries
Damsel in distress waiting for prince charming to save her in the local pub with a cheap beer beside Orc, "why do I have to seat beside an Orc now"
"Life is not daijoubu"
STONE WARRIORS- saga of the lost
Strong characters
World build up
We all fight battle daily and each one of us is warrior
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605]
Once I commented I didn't even edit that comment
I commented something new my previous link changed back to normal
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Just a warning guys do give your book names with the link or else such bugs can deprive you of power stones
Alancaster
Hey I don't know what's happening but you should see this your link too got changed
Take a screenshot before commenting because after you comment it changes back to normal
Bugs these days :")
Stormzz
I didn't link that
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605
I linked my book
WHAT'S HAPPENING?!
CAN YOU PLEASE HELP ME OUT
Because of some glitch or I don't know
STONE WARRIORS - SAGA OF THE LOST(My book name)
maddaug
Hey, I have reviewed your novel... good main character
Here's mine
Saher_Abidi
Sure !!
maddaug
That's not super long ! Lol
okay let's swap
Sunus_Writes
Sure !!
senshiAuthor
Just reviewed your work... and by the way, it's amazing to know that two people can work together to create good novels
Can you review mine?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605
https://m.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605
You can check out my novel it has very little romance, it's more about kingdom conflict and magic school.
Got FL 
Stormzz
Please take a look at my novel(Female Lead Princess)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605
xash_alan
Oh hi! wanna do a swap... I will add your novel to the library, give a review, and comment on chapters!
I can totally understand you....same here! I later saw 5000-word criteria for female princess lead!
AreumBear141
Hey, would you mind checking out my Novel and giving some reviews...
The FL and ML match your description... though my novel is new, and the character development is ongoing you will understand once you read it!
Here's the link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stone-warriors---saga-of-the-lost_22567407706394605
P.S. There's a lot of amazing men in my novel you can go and chose your one