Unm @Billdoor @The_Inheritor @Miya @Supreme_Idler
I just literally found a few of you guys. -_- i didn't know your users before.
Unm @Billdoor @The_Inheritor @Miya @Supreme_Idler
I just literally found a few of you guys. -_- i didn't know your users before.
turtleboiii I'm here! What is happening?
NineNeatherBird lol idk. I can't access discord so I'm just like chilling here
turtleboiii Ohhhh :smile:
So... how's it going?
Who here has twitter btw
NineNeatherBird lol boring af but ur here now
Was replying to comments on my new chapter
turtleboiii No I don't have twitter :smile: But maybe I will create an account just to look at God Elon's twitter feed.
turtleboiii well, I don't have many comments on my chapters :sweat_smile:
NineNeatherBird what's your book. I wish we could search books by author name too here.
Who's God Elon?
turtleboiii My book is Noiseless.
What's your book called?
God Elon is "Elon Musk" Creator of Tesla, Founder of SpaceX, the one who will take over Mars, the one who sold flamethrowers like hats, the evil superhero.
His twitter-feed is hilarious:
https://www.google.at/search?q=Elon+Musk+twitter&safe=strict&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjc1PrD7ubaAhUSGuwKHRWICM8Q_AUIDCgD&biw=1920&bih=987
NineNeatherBird ohhh seems like i got someone new to follow.
Mine is Harem of Deceit and Lies
I'll check yours out btw
turtleboiii :smile:
Thanks. I will read yours too; shouldn't take long.
NineNeatherBird lmao not at all. Only two chapter
I was summoned? Here i am
turtleboiii Hello
In Chapter 2: Liao Jie when will we get married?
you wrote "queit" instead of "quiet"
"tine" instead of "time"
"i" instead of "I"
Chapter 3:
'No you're majesty, this servant doesn't dare to voice an opinion as such.'
should be 'No, your Majesty. This . . . '
. . . as she walked our with her daughter . .
should be "walked out"
The men that -> The men who
A few of then couldn't help -> A few of them ...
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It's nicely written. I think it is more the opposite of my writing style.
I describe surroundings, things, looks and such. You describe emotions, feelings, and such.
But I don't like romance. That's also why I don't read the famous romance novels here like 100CEO or those.
its me
Yo i read those chapters, they are good. Mostly i read less Romance but i already hate the emperor :D
NineNeatherBird lol thank you so much. I should screenshot this. Smh and i thought i fully edited chapter 2.
Wanna be my editor? ;)
Lol