turtleboiii My book is Noiseless.
What's your book called?

God Elon is "Elon Musk" Creator of Tesla, Founder of SpaceX, the one who will take over Mars, the one who sold flamethrowers like hats, the evil superhero.
His twitter-feed is hilarious:
https://www.google.at/search?q=Elon+Musk+twitter&safe=strict&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjc1PrD7ubaAhUSGuwKHRWICM8Q_AUIDCgD&biw=1920&bih=987

    In Chapter 2: Liao Jie when will we get married?
    you wrote "queit" instead of "quiet"
    "tine" instead of "time"
    "i" instead of "I"

    Chapter 3:
    'No you're majesty, this servant doesn't dare to voice an opinion as such.'
    should be 'No, your Majesty. This . . . '

    . . . as she walked our with her daughter . .
    should be "walked out"

    The men that -> The men who

    A few of then couldn't help -> A few of them ...

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    It's nicely written. I think it is more the opposite of my writing style.
    I describe surroundings, things, looks and such. You describe emotions, feelings, and such.
    But I don't like romance. That's also why I don't read the famous romance novels here like 100CEO or those.

      Yo i read those chapters, they are good. Mostly i read less Romance but i already hate the emperor :D

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