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turtleboiii My book is Noiseless.
What's your book called?

God Elon is "Elon Musk" Creator of Tesla, Founder of SpaceX, the one who will take over Mars, the one who sold flamethrowers like hats, the evil superhero.
His twitter-feed is hilarious:
https://www.google.at/search?q=Elon+Musk+twitter&safe=strict&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjc1PrD7ubaAhUSGuwKHRWICM8Q_AUIDCgD&biw=1920&bih=987

NineNeatherBird ohhh seems like i got someone new to follow.
Mine is Harem of Deceit and Lies
I'll check yours out btw

turtleboiii :smile:
Thanks. I will read yours too; shouldn't take long.

NineNeatherBird lmao not at all. Only two chapter

I was summoned? Here i am

In Chapter 2: Liao Jie when will we get married?
you wrote "queit" instead of "quiet"
"tine" instead of "time"
"i" instead of "I"

Chapter 3:
'No you're majesty, this servant doesn't dare to voice an opinion as such.'
should be 'No, your Majesty. This . . . '

. . . as she walked our with her daughter . .
should be "walked out"

The men that -> The men who

A few of then couldn't help -> A few of them ...

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It's nicely written. I think it is more the opposite of my writing style.
I describe surroundings, things, looks and such. You describe emotions, feelings, and such.
But I don't like romance. That's also why I don't read the famous romance novels here like 100CEO or those.

its me

Yo i read those chapters, they are good. Mostly i read less Romance but i already hate the emperor :D

NineNeatherBird lol thank you so much. I should screenshot this. Smh and i thought i fully edited chapter 2.
Wanna be my editor? ;)
Lol

turtleboiii well he seems like a collector of woman.

And here i'm called a pervert while this guy is a really big ass :D i'll probably hate him more in the next chapter

turtleboiii I would have no problem with being your editor.
But I can only edit 1 chapter a day.

I will go eat now and edit your 2 chapters later. :wink:

NineNeatherBird yeeessss thank you so much. Yea I'll prolly only post one a day anyways. I wanted to write three now but lost the file.

Billdoor you more than likely will lol

I am so bored cz
1 i can't be on discord now
2 no one is mailing me my friend is already gone to bed. Smh timezones
3 i want to write but can't unless I'll loose my inspiration

I need help

turtleboiii why cant you be on discord? Can't you discord app for either mobile or pc?
Just gotta ask around, there would be a lot of people writing with you :D

Billdoor don't have a pc.
Can't access the app cz some stupid restriction shit is enabled atm

turtleboiii thats shitty, gotta tell me a other way to contact you :D

Billdoor lmao it is