turtleboiii :smile:
Thanks. I will read yours too; shouldn't take long.
Idek this is like random
NineNeatherBird lmao not at all. Only two chapter
I was summoned? Here i am
- Edited
turtleboiii Hello
In Chapter 2: Liao Jie when will we get married?
you wrote "queit" instead of "quiet"
"tine" instead of "time"
"i" instead of "I"
Chapter 3:
'No you're majesty, this servant doesn't dare to voice an opinion as such.'
should be 'No, your Majesty. This . . . '
. . . as she walked our with her daughter . .
should be "walked out"
The men that -> The men who
A few of then couldn't help -> A few of them ...
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It's nicely written. I think it is more the opposite of my writing style.
I describe surroundings, things, looks and such. You describe emotions, feelings, and such.
But I don't like romance. That's also why I don't read the famous romance novels here like 100CEO or those.
its me
Yo i read those chapters, they are good. Mostly i read less Romance but i already hate the emperor :D
NineNeatherBird lol thank you so much. I should screenshot this. Smh and i thought i fully edited chapter 2.
Wanna be my editor? ;)
Lol
Billdoor lmao same here who doesn't.
20 freaking 9 wives/concubine
turtleboiii well he seems like a collector of woman.
And here i'm called a pervert while this guy is a really big ass :D i'll probably hate him more in the next chapter
turtleboiii I would have no problem with being your editor.
But I can only edit 1 chapter a day.
I will go eat now and edit your 2 chapters later. :wink:
NineNeatherBird yeeessss thank you so much. Yea I'll prolly only post one a day anyways. I wanted to write three now but lost the file.
Billdoor you more than likely will lol
I am so bored cz
1 i can't be on discord now
2 no one is mailing me my friend is already gone to bed. Smh timezones
3 i want to write but can't unless I'll loose my inspiration
I need help
turtleboiii why cant you be on discord? Can't you discord app for either mobile or pc?
Just gotta ask around, there would be a lot of people writing with you :D
Billdoor don't have a pc.
Can't access the app cz some stupid restriction shit is enabled atm
turtleboiii thats shitty, gotta tell me a other way to contact you :D
Billdoor lmao it is
I have email lol
turtleboiii When you can access discord again, you gotta send me that adress :D Dont want you to send it here so that everyone can see it