Hi! i have a great story but i don't have the skill of a writer, if you interested contact me.

the story about a young boy that died a tragic death and he wake up in cave,

taking a body of strong cultivator that failed he's turibulation to ascend to the middle heaven.

the cultivator have a painful story, so aware young hero swear to the heaven

that sence he could not change his fate back in earth this time he will change

he's fate Even if he would die.... at this moment the last heavenly tribulation descend

that change his fate.

    Sythcake aw maybe instead of saying it's gay you can give him advice on how to improve or why you don't like it

        Intro sounds kinda generic, more details please?

          I dlnt get it,, more detail please?

            lemme guess, the last tribulation gives him the power of lighting, or 5 elements, or some overpowered system or cultivation method that can be started right away or requires him to start cultivation over again?

            Tbh anyone can think of a good story, but u need more details here and there, not a vague summary, try adding onto the story, the cultivation layers/levels. oh, another guess is, the cultivator died unable to take the 2nd to the ​ last tribulation but thanks to the kid that reincarnates, it gives him a chance to continue cultivating?

              Sounds... Average?? Common?? Pathetic?? I don't know the right word for it...
              Every great novel just need some spice in it. Not just vague gibberish.
              I myself want to be a writer but i think i have not yet attain "Readable" level yet.
              Look at this post's grammar as example. Quite messy ain't it?

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