What’s insane is the fact that authors can already delete comments and reviews. Either learn to take criticism or don’t post shit for others to judge.
As a reader, I’m sick and tired of picking up highly rated books only to find out that they were written by an illiterate 8 year old. And now such “authors” are clamoring for a right to outright ban readers that dare to criticize their “books”? Fuck that lol
MisterImmortal You are Tolkien reincarnate, I presume?
Wot?
MisterImmortal And a troll calling a book bad is cool. But he repeatedly calls for rape on someone's parents. If you're okay with that, then you're no better.
I don’t remember justifying the troll’s choice of words. Just trying to say that if you weren’t so shit as a wannabe author, you wouldn’t be dealing with such crap.
P.S. Check out the title of this thread and learn to take your own advice.
MisterImmortal What did Mark Twain say? I didn’t read your post either. Just saw you crying like a wee bit bitch because some retarded troll shat all over the poor excuse of a novel you’re writing.
Btw, you’re lucky that it isn’t Mark Twain that is criticizing your crap - “ I haven't any right to criticize books, and I don't do it except when I hate them. I often want to criticize Jane Austen, but her books madden me so that I can't conceal my frenzy from the reader; and therefore I have to stop every time I begin. Every time I read Pride and Prejudice I want to dig her up and beat her over the skull with her own shin-bone.”
Maybe if your book wasn’t so shit, you’d get a lot less hate.
P.S. Never read your book before but since you’re posting it here, consider my comment as an educated guess.
If people are willing to buy shit, webnovel is more than happy to provide.
Tomoyuki oh ffs, how much I hate this forum. Was almost done with my wall of text reply to your post when I accidentally brushed my finger on the left side of the screen, which this dumbass mf of an app took as a command to shut down the forum.
Now all I can say is - fuck this forum’s design and fuck School Days while we’re at it.
Tomoyuki and while Makoto deserved what happened to him
How does anyone deserves to be sliced up for having consensual sex?
Tomoyuki None of the girls had any real reason to be in love with him.
He become a hot commodity. Akin to a new iPhone that you simply gotta have just because some of your classmates bought it and are now showing off.
Tomoyuki There was nothing attractive about him at all, so I honestly didn't understand the angst or why they were so dependent on him or so desperate for him.
I think someone got pregnant.
Tomoyuki Yeah, but those marriages are either political, made based on monetary reasons, or arranged by parents.
Doesn’t mean that the women are unhappy with such an arrangement. They were raised differently and pretty much perceive the world from a whole different perspective.
Tomoyuki The wish fulfilment part refers to how the story and world appear to revolve around the protagonist, as if he's the only eligible man in the world or something.
Well, the protag of a wish fulfillment story is usually the most eligible man in the world.
P.S. And before u continue to force me to crusade for a topic that I don’t care much about, simply reread the post that I replied to without over analyzing it and then take a look at my reply to it.
The dude pretty much said - Harems don’t exist
And I replied - they actually do
Misguided_Rooster Harem is trash and will always be trash. Every single auhor that has a harem in their stories is a cheap and lame author. I hope you get arthitis.
Brah, your username literally discredits all your arguments and opinions.
yu_ba_bu_neng Its just that some books here have literally less value as reading material than a fucking shampoo bottle does.
Hey! Saying that ONLY ‘some’ books here have less reading value than a shampoo bottle is offensive towards the shampoo bottle.
I request, no.. I demand that you edit it to “most”.
Edition -
1.
a particular form or version of a published text.
"a paperback edition"
2.
the total number of copies of a book, newspaper, or other published material issued at one time.
"variations occurred after some of the edition had already been published"
Yap… and the sky is blue, while the grass is green. TRULY SHOCKING!!!
anushka_puri So long as you don’t use … in every other sentence of your novel, then feel free to try it.
