[unknown] Hello, i just read your Novel's prologue and i must say, i am very hooked.

If i got free time then i would love to check your work out. But till that time, check out my novel "red blood century". If you liked it then add it in your collections. We'll do review swap

    MayDreamer Hi. I have read and had a short preview of your story. I do not read romance but yours is kind of more or less interesting and has a bland impact for me. Make your Synopsis and Prologue more intriguing to captivate your new readers. English Grammar and Spelling may be improved and I will continue reading/giving the ratings after you have posted 10 chapters or more. Thank you.

      [unknown] Thank you so much for the suggestions, I would do that for sure! And for grammar and spellings I will try my best.

        Rathowm  Hi. I have read and had a short preview of your story.
        So far, it felt like a linear story telling/narration for me due to the consistent us of pronouns especially (I).
        Add a short Prologue if you must to make it more intriguing to captivate your new readers.
        English Grammar and Spelling may be improved.
        Thank you.

            Kailykilimo Hi. I have read and had a short preview of your story.
            So far, assuming that English is not your first language, the synopsis felt like it is the literal annoying translation of your actual good draft and efforts so I suggest to reduce it & make it a little shorter next time.
            It also felt like a linear story telling/narration for me due to the consistent use of pronouns especially (She) that MIGHT refer to your other female characters excluding Olivia.
            Find a way to relate/include the characters' POV without actually creating a bunch of paragraphs onto it.
            Add a short Prologue if you must to make it more intriguing to captivate your new readers.
            English Grammar and Spelling may be improved.
            Thank you.

                RomanceFanatic028 Hi. Oh you were? Thank you. So, here are my sole opinions about your story.
                = So far, assuming that English is not your first language, here is a friendly tip: English sentences mostly starts in a CAPITAL letters and ends with a period like this.
                = The synopsis also felt like it is the literal annoying translation of your actual good draft and efforts so I suggest to reduce it & make it a little shorter next time. It acts as the "banner" your story making your new readers wonder what is up next as they continue read it.
                = It also felt like a boring story narration for me due to the consistent use of pronouns especially (I) since the chapters started on a POV form.
                = Find a way to relate/include your characters' POV without actually creating an entire chapter of paragraphs onto it.
                = Add a short Prologue if you must to make it more intriguing to captivate your new readers.
                = English Grammar and Spelling may be improved.
                Thank you.

                    Angelica2511 Hi.
                    I had a very short preview your story and can I ask you this question?
                    Are you sure you want me to give you my opinions about this? Thank you.

                        [unknown] I feel like you didn't read my novel properly. It is like you are copy pasting what you wrote in your previous comment. But yeah, English is not my first language and i also know that sentence start with capital and end with a period. But before writing my first chapter i was immature writer so maybe i might have made little mistakes.. but i can't agree with the fact that you said my story narration was boring because if it was not interesting then i would have never gotten 40k views on my novel. But thankyou so much for taking your time to review my book, i really appreciate it.

                          [unknown], of course. This is my first book that recently got contracted. I genuinely want your review. Thank you.

                            [unknown]
                            I prefer using third party view, l don't like using POV. Are you copy pasting the comment dear?cause l can see you told every author the same comment. Thank you for reading my novel,l went through yours too. Just it's just the way you said,strange, l enjoyed it though.

                              Kailykilimo Welcome. Those are not "copy and paste" reviews btw. Most stories these others posted and I have read so far, has the same set of problems for starters.

                                  RomanceFanatic028
                                  Thank you and welcome. Btw, the number of "views/ratings" posted in our stories has nothing to do with Web Novel at all.
                                  They already not using/ditched that "rating" system many years ago. That is what they said on the forum section. They said that "no unlocked chapters/paid privilages/no gifts" from your readers NO EARNINGS...regardless of the views and etc. Sad.

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