Dinessu I have done it, I mean no hate with it, you wanted my honest opinion, I gave it. You want me to change it? Sure! Tell me. 🙂

    Dinessu Ty! I had no desire of undermining another person’s effort, I just spoke truth. My own novels aren’t any good, like I said, my first novel has 95 chapters and 290k words yet only 26 coll, I just keep writing for fun. 🙂. I am certain your novel will definitely reach those for whom it is meant.

      Nikola_Niko You are saying this. I am saying your writing skill is far better than mine. I have got to learn a lot from your book. The emotions of the characters and the scenes of massacre you describe are good. It's vivid. Put it simply, it's awesome.

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