Ba_nks hey can u review mine as well..... l'll go roght now and review urs...
But it will take some times as l always read the story before reviewing it as l feel it will be fair for everyone.....
So l am expecting the same from u....but u don't have to read all of them but l am requesting u to read atleast 2 or 3 chapters before u do review.....Plzzz...
https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305
Thank u...

      Bunny_Junnie Done with yours.... Your story line has great potential... As for the grammar mistake I advice you to use grammarly, it helps me alot as English is also not my first language, I hope it will be of some help to you

          Hi guys!!! This is My new piece of work

          A DAUGHTER OF AN EX-MAFIA

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          New chapter is released
          Male lead, action, mafia, campus
          Sanjana, also called as sanjay, is the first daughter and the heir of a mafia family who has no sons. Everything was going well until a sudden blast took her father's life. Instead of accepting and taking power to her hand, she applies for an abroad university and plays an innocent girly role although she was a very tough and far away from being feminine. But her inner personality starts searching for something she didn’t know about her beloved father's death. Finally she gets to know about her father's murderer and what will happen next? Will she be able to take her revenge for her dad? What is the connection between Roshen, her best friend or the secret love with that murderer?

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            Ba_nks I'm done with yours..
            Nice plot, you have a unique romance story... The only thing that I wanted to point out is the long paragraphs and sometimes you mixed two people talking in them and got me confused as to whom was speaking.. Your paragraphs could be reduced a bit, it helps the reader to keep up and avoid confusion.... Just my opinion

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                  Please read and review my work.

                  Synopsis

                  [WARNING: MATURE CONTENT]

                  From birth to him being seven years old, Osmond ward knew only about his village. He thought that the world was beautiful and one day he will venture into the unknown and see it for himself.

                  It all changed on that day.

                  Orcs and goblins and ogres flowed. They plundered, raped and feasted.

                  On that day he witnessed nightmares in life.

                  Orphaned and powerless, he was saved by a stranger. A man to whom he was forced upon.

                  What will Osmond ward seek now?.

                  Author's note:

                  I am a non native English speaker.

                  This is my first work. I wanted a story with non op characters and real stakes.

                  I support all forms of constructive criticism and i hope you will enjoy my work.

                  Link below.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/graeae-%0D-land-of-beauty-and-nightmares_23880683806254305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320157483

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