Junni_MC
In the review, or here? Couse I'm already reading it, and I can tell you it needs a lot of work. Don't get discouraged, though, there is potential.

    Junni_MC
    Happy to help. Watch the lectures I mentioned, they will be an even greater help. The whole series is amazing. It will make you actually know what you are doing. It did marvels for me.

      Ama_Chuma
      Sure. No problem. Do you wish just for the review, or also for the pointers? And if you want the pointers as well, do you want them dropped here, or in the review? Please answer.

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