Junni_MC
Happy to help. Watch the lectures I mentioned, they will be an even greater help. The whole series is amazing. It will make you actually know what you are doing. It did marvels for me.

      Ama_Chuma
      Sure. No problem. Do you wish just for the review, or also for the pointers? And if you want the pointers as well, do you want them dropped here, or in the review? Please answer.

          Flattened_Rice_007
          No problem, just please first let me know if you just want to swap reviews or also want the pointers. If you want the pointers, please tell me if you want them in the review, or here. Please also remember that the review has a limited amount of characters and I'm very likely to go over that limit.

              Shamelessly promoting my story! If you were to read and leave a review, I would also take time to check out your story. 🙂

              You may be brutally honest in your reviews.

              Here are the genres: Shoujo/Josei, Infrastructure, Romance, Apocalypse, Pregnancy, Game Elements, Adventure, Kingdom Building

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/altera-city-in-another-world_25926694405418805

              SUMMARY:
              Althea was one of the few surviving humans of Terran Star after a calamity that ended the galaxy. The strange force of the universe helped them immigrate to a strange new land, forcing them to create a home for themselves.

              The survivors were depressed. First they were forced to survive in a zombie apocalypse, and now they had to survive a new world altogether?

              It just so happened that Althea was one of the few people who got the Lord Token. Would she be able to build a good home for her children and fellowmen?

              Garan, after several brushes with death, finally found a clue to his wife. However, before he could hug her, he saw her hugging strange adorable children instead.

              "..."

                MrAuthor101 Thank you so much for the review. It helped me a lot. And apologies for the delay. I am reading your book right now, and it is completely engrossing. Will review it positively by tomorrow.

                  8 days later

                  Failed Villain (BL)
                  Link - https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26365531606124305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310067693
                  Synopsis - One day Celyn a sidekick villain from a superhero comic traveled to a parallel world into a body of Li Jie. The world was completely different from his original. Only his face was still the same.
                  Celyn was now Li Jie. He looked at his mother who still loved him. His father was a wealthy businessman but still fought with him like a jealous child. But deep down still loved him.
                  Unfortunately, the price to live in this world was to be a cannon fodder villain. And bully the main character and get a bad ending.
                  "Sure." In end, Li Jie decided to accept the task given by the system to live in this world.
                  He decided to target the main character by stealing his main character's spot at the university. But, he mistakenly made history with his perfect score.
                  "Forget about the building donation Mr. Li Jie please tell me you are still choosing our university." A certain university principal.
                  Li Jie gritted his teeth at his failure. And choose the university that was near his house for convenience unfortunately he ended up being in the same class as the Male lead.
                  He copped himself in the house in name of studying the whole semester to avoid the male lead. But ended up taking first place semester.
                  He decided to make the male lead jealous of his family's wealth by writing an essay on his family business only to get a business partnership offer from the main villain Leng Rui.
                  "You don't want to work with me. Okay." Li Jie thought he was done for after rejecting the main villain twice but nothing happened to him.
                  He tried going the basic villain by building a nuclear reactor only to get recognized by the key research organizations in the country.
                  He entered the family company to bully his brother to get some bad press but to his dismay, he was an only child through and through. In turn he got overworked by his father.
                  Leave a review after wards i will review yours or we can both do it at same time just tag me.

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