MrAuthor101 review and give your honest opinion
Review swap, review for review
Junni_MC
In the review, or here? Couse I'm already reading it, and I can tell you it needs a lot of work. Don't get discouraged, though, there is potential.
MrAuthor101 in the review
I dropped the review, but it's mostly the pointers.
MrAuthor101 I just read your review and it was a real eye-opener. thank you very much this helps me a lot
Junni_MC
Happy to help. Watch the lectures I mentioned, they will be an even greater help. The whole series is amazing. It will make you actually know what you are doing. It did marvels for me.
MrAuthor101 please I need your honest review https://m.webnovel.com/book/he-is-my-obsession_26186666605325905
Ama_Chuma
Sure. No problem. Do you wish just for the review, or also for the pointers? And if you want the pointers as well, do you want them dropped here, or in the review? Please answer.
BS_Entertainment yep 
I need a honest review and comment basically I want to improve my writing skills.
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MrAuthor101 Hi,
Need an honest review on my ongoing work. Here is the link to my novel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/moonlit-identity_26163746606485205
Let me know your thoughts.
Flattened_Rice_007
No problem, just please first let me know if you just want to swap reviews or also want the pointers. If you want the pointers, please tell me if you want them in the review, or here. Please also remember that the review has a limited amount of characters and I'm very likely to go over that limit.
Shamelessly promoting my story! If you were to read and leave a review, I would also take time to check out your story. 
You may be brutally honest in your reviews.
Here are the genres: Shoujo/Josei, Infrastructure, Romance, Apocalypse, Pregnancy, Game Elements, Adventure, Kingdom Building
https://www.webnovel.com/book/altera-city-in-another-world_25926694405418805
SUMMARY:
Althea was one of the few surviving humans of Terran Star after a calamity that ended the galaxy. The strange force of the universe helped them immigrate to a strange new land, forcing them to create a home for themselves.
The survivors were depressed. First they were forced to survive in a zombie apocalypse, and now they had to survive a new world altogether?
It just so happened that Althea was one of the few people who got the Lord Token. Would she be able to build a good home for her children and fellowmen?
Garan, after several brushes with death, finally found a clue to his wife. However, before he could hug her, he saw her hugging strange adorable children instead.
"..."
MrAuthor101 Sure.
The pointers in review would be no problem. Please post there only. However, if the pointers go over the characters, please ping here.
Flattened_Rice_007
Done, with the pointers. Some of it was cut, but only a couple of sentences, and the merit of what I was saying stayed there, so yeah...
I'm interested here's mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/anomalous-focus_25816039905008005