Biva thank u so much ....l really appreciate you... And l really liked our story... Mainly the magical one ....so l will surely support u in the future...
Thank u...

    Rainbowprincess hey l've done reviwing urs....u didn't upload more but still l can say that its a very nice story......l really liked it truly ...... Keep going and upload more ...
    https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305

    Here my link so if u also want to review mine so plzzz l'll be greatful to u and also plzzz do read a few chapter as l did before u review it... And don't forget to like the author's page as well... l've also done it for u...
    Thank u

      Biva Maybe it can also be interpreted like that. For example, your main character has had a solid goal from the start, which is to find the origin of the purpose of her existence in the world you created.

      And as she travels from one place to another or from one city to another, she meets several new faces with unique personalities and backgrounds. So that it makes the reader enjoy the adventure that your main character is going through.

      Now, it's up to you whether you're going to put all that in 10 chapters or slow it down in 30 chapters. Of course, it's all a matter of taste, and I happen to prefer stories with a slow plot.

      I hope you enjoy your day, and may everything run smoothly for you in the future. That is all I have to say.

        Biva Hey I reviewed your first book I am currently reading the second one. Also I would advise you to edit the sypnosis of the first book as it is quite confusing and doesn't explain the book properly.

          InstaMoist Thank you for the suggestion. I was conflicted to make it slow or fast. So I think I gonna slow it. Really thanks.

            Kara_wish_writes Thank you for the review and I have given two review. One from this and another Joye... You have wonderful work. I have added it to the library too.

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