Can someone please will review my book rejected alpha after reading it. It's just a new book and I am a new author. so it will be helpful. I can review your book instead.

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      Instead of seeing the story from one point of view, this series will allow the reader to hear the story from each character's point of view, allowing the reader to experience the story in 360-degrees. After all, our entire lives are merely a tale for someone sitting above us.

      my story is a little different from a normal point of view story, I want someone to read from chapters 1 to 9, chapter 10 is the beginning of the new event, also if you find any mistake or suggestion in a paragraph you are welcome to comment...

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        A daughter of an Ex-mafia
        https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-daughter-of-an-ex-mafia_23743400906999005
        Synopsis
        Sanjana, also called as sanjay, is the first daughter and the heir of a mafia family who has no sons. Everything was going well until a sudden blast took her father's life. Instead of accepting and taking power to her hand, she applies for an abroad university and plays an innocent girly role although she was a very tough and far away from being feminine. But her inner personality starts searching for something she didn’t know about her beloved father's death. Finally she gets to know about her father's murderer and what will happen next? Will she be able to take her revenge for her dad? What is the connection between Roshen, her best friend or the secret love with that murderer?
        Chapter 1 - Prey or predator
        Chapter 2- My true face ( part 1)
        Chapter 3 - My true face ( part 2)
        Chapter 4 - Past to the present
        Chapter 5 - A new era
        Chapter 6 - Memories #unforgottable

        to be continued -

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            Rosy_786 u haven't tag me well and so couldn't find ur msg early.... But l've read it and really liked the concept... But plzz do make ur paragraph a bit small and try to remove some unnecessary scence..... Instead of that everything is nice and interesting..
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