Sneakycat098 1) I tried improving it a lot of times, and that was the best I could do so far, but I'll try to think of another way to convey the sonopsis as you said!
2) Hmm... The are some paras that are long and some that are pretty short, it depends on the content. At first, I wrote very short paras, but I the thing got reeeeally long and dragging, then I started mixing them, short and long, but I will take into account the spacing and re-read the whole thing so readers don't get lost o tired!
Don't sweat it! I'm happy to receive constructive suggestions! If not, I wouldn't have come here hehe I hope you like it!! 
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