Is it good?
innocent_asian Love the prologue, it's captivating and full of suspense
innocent_asian sounds like a cool story
What about the story itself?
And yeah thanks a lot for your reply
Just let me know a little bit about story beginning, like will a reader continue reading it or will he just drop it?
Don't mind my English, ok?
innocent_asian your English is fine dear
innocent_asian I think the story is attractive, you may be able to grab attention with just the introduction and prologue, but keeping that attention happen within the story, as you continue to write more and more.
QW_JiHi thanks
innocent_asian no problem! Keep up the good work!
QW_JiHi sure, would you like to follow this novel?
innocent_asian alright!
