aleksandra_pano10 hey I read the first chapter and I think the story started off greatly! I love a confident and strong female character.

One piece of advice, is the writing style, because I was confused when sometimes I couldn't tell where the dialogue was in the story.

      QW_JiHi Thank you 😊
      Actually even in my reviews people have told me that sometimes my writing style is confusing but I'm new at writing in a platform.
      I guess now I'm getting used with this " writing style than this - writing style 😅

          aleksandra_pano10 It's okay!
          I have only one book so far and when I started writing it, I had the Same problem too but I learned to fix, and I'm constantly editing and fixing my novel.

          Here's an example of my writing style:

          Frustrated Ned pulled on his hair, "Ugh, if the king himself doesn't have a chance what do we have then?" he stated, both of him and Matilda still haven't found true love.

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