cheshir Hey! I read your comments. Thanks for the feedback on writing stuff but I was just looking for someone to genuinely read and just comment as you would on a normal novel you might give a try, not feedback on stuff(?).
But I still appreciate feedback, so I will comment on more than 5 of your chapters, none of it will be feedback tho because I'm not looking for that or reviews.
edit: it turns out you only have 5 chapters out. But they are good.
I didn't mention it there cause I wanted to just enjoy the story and not make comments on writing, but the world description in the first few chapters did not stick well with me. If it is possible to cut some of it and adjust it into later chapters I think that will make the start more palatable for average webnovel readers.
Overall I think its good. Best of luck with writing it!