Para23
Brother your chapters are so long.
2.5K words in each chapter why xD.
my true thoughts i loved it, you are pretty good at describing the main character and the world back ground.
i like it i hope you succeed.

      Jovilynx
      yes .
      i just read your review it was just perfect and your advice i will work on improving
      i will read your story now and review it once iam done

          DaasWolfe I added you book in my library and gave you a honest review. Take no offence because I point out the mistake. Hope you will cover it soon. I didn't wrote more in review but I would suggest you to look thoroughly on your grammer. As I start reading it there was this mistakes which was easily catchable. You don't have to give readers this opportunity to back off. You have to make them not leave this book until they were done reading whole. Also make your Synopsis long and attractive. You understood what I mean. So best of luck!! Here is my link waiting for yours.

          https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-phantasm-of-magic_24864643205062405

              dreamerx29
              thank you, i took no offense instead i am happy you took interest in my book and gave me advises.
              i will be reading your book now i will give you my review in few minutes.

                  dreamerx29
                  its a good story i wish you success
                  i couldn't read everything i have to go now sadly. but i am really curios and i wish to know is her uncle a big shot or something, also you mentioned her cousin is there a deep plot or you will just remove them after?

                    DaasWolfe Haha yeah, my chapters are pretty long lol. Thank you for the honest review!

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