Endless Mountains
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11664564305472105/Endless-Mountains
I honestly do not think it is perfect however I try to fix mistakes and I am looking for someone to honestly review my novel
Also can you please read to the latest chapter as I believe my writing quality gets better every chapter
I am in year 11 a crucial year for me but i do 2 chapters sometimes i might do 1 chapter a day and in my first two days i was able to do 3 chapters
I've only started this book this week so I'm not sure what exactly are the bad parts so that's why i need a reviewer who will criticise me
(Dont be too harsh)

Review please if you have spare time.

A Chromatic World

A Chromatic World is a fantasy story that starts from Earth year 1969 leading up to the Multiverse. The Earth was written with the same history timeline with an altered flair, with the addition of Magic, different Races, and etc. Filled with romance, actions, and adventure.

Join Arthur and his group. Educated to be the Messiah of Earth, their journey's will be filled with thorns, twists, and turns. One tragedy after another. Will they yield to their fate? Or break away their shackles of destiny?

    DKQ You all on the FB ( Webnovel Writers) it gets pretty quiet over there I think the admin is planning a feedback thing! Maybe you can help?

        I would like a review too please, if you have spare time...

        Demon King Is So adorable

        Genre : fantasy, romance, yaoi/BL

        Updates a chapter per two days

        Please check my story, so I can improve my writing, thank you very much deep bow

          12 days later

          HI guys! If ever you are wondering why there aren't much people reviewing your books these days or months, it is probably because they havent checked this thread in a long time and they are focused in the review requests on the discord server. If you want to have your books criticized and be seen immediately by the reviewers, please do join the OAS sever, https://discord.gg/Jq7rEB2

            6 months later
            a month later

            Hi, I would like to request a review
            Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13744467406114805
            Genre: Fantasy
            I feel as though I might be using commas incorrectly, but other than that I think the grammar should be fine. I'm more worried about how much or how little I'm describing, whether I'm 'telling' and not 'showing', if my characters and their dialogues seem realistic enough, or if my story is flowing consistently. I have made notes and mapped my story quite a bit, but I can't really tell how my readers feel when they are reading the story.
            I update one chapter daily.

              Can I sign up as an editor?
              I am also an original novels author. I have two novels and am on the process of drafting two more.
              I had to stop writing for some months due to reasons but I want to come back in the game .

                DKQ Hello, after opening the link on "Writing Guide to Improve Yourself." Google Docs said (The file is in the owner's trash. You will soon permanently lose access to this file. For continued access, please make a copy). As I only stumbled upon this thread, I hope you don't mind I make a copy out of it to improve my writing.

                    Request for a review
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/13500525605023205
                    Genre: Romance fiction

                    I'm a beginner and hope that you will my writing style. Although it is a romance fiction, but it will not be typical romantic story but will be filled with revenge and mysteries....
                    Updates are 1 chapter/ day if not some emergency.

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