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yaoyueyi I read your story 'power up artist yang' and it was amazing! I love how non-op and realistic the situation of the lead has become, making her rely on the only skill that had brought her nothing but misery in her previous life. The only thing I have a problem with is the update speed. Why do you torture me so?

Sapphire_2721
I've left the review in the review section of the book I chose and I've mentioned which one in the chapter for that book.

Title: Phoenix Rise: XieRong
Synopsis:
In this world, only if you are strong, can you protect the people you love.

Dressing Xierong as Fa Chun, a limp and foolish boy, was one of the things her mother had done to ensure a relatively peaceful life until their escape. However, the treacherous people inside the Fa Estate had other plans.

When XieRong loses her mother at the hands of the Fa family, she runs away with her sister vowing to return stronger and take her.
PS. I've written more about what to expect in a review of my book.
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13744467406114805

Title: Phoenix Rise: XieRong
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Author: Sapphire_2721
Synopsis:
In this world, only if you are strong, can you protect the people you love.

Dressing Xierong as Fa Chun, a limp and foolish boy, was one of the things her mother had done to ensure a relatively peaceful life until their escape. However, the treacherous people inside the Fa Estate had other plans.

When XieRong loses her mother at the hands of the Fa family, she runs away with her sister vowing to return stronger and take her revenge.

I'll leave the review as a comment in your book

Hi, I would like to request a review
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13744467406114805
Genre: Fantasy
I feel as though I might be using commas incorrectly, but other than that I think the grammar should be fine. I'm more worried about how much or how little I'm describing, whether I'm 'telling' and not 'showing', if my characters and their dialogues seem realistic enough, or if my story is flowing consistently. I have made notes and mapped my story quite a bit, but I can't really tell how my readers feel when they are reading the story.
I update one chapter daily.

Hi, I'm looking for an editor (that is, if you are still accepting requests)
I can only offer you credits in my book
But I'll make sure to edit the chapters as much as I can before handing them over to you.
Here is what I'll require you to do if you accept:
1. Check for any typos or grammar errors (this isn't that much of a priority and won't be a problem either, since I make sure to correct all of these)
2. Check for plot holes or any discontinuity between chapters. (I do check for these but I'm not really sure if I'm doing a good job, so I would like someone to reread and review my chapters before I post them).
3. Check if my chapter flows, dialogues are realistic, character consistency, if I need to describe more and if so which areas and an overall analysis of areas that need improving and how I can make them better. (This is the part I'm having most trouble analysing and also why I came here looking for an editor).
Thank you so much

Hello, I'd like a cover if possible as my current cover is just a picture from Pinterest with the title slapped on by me
•Title: Phoenix Rise: XieRong
•Author name: Sapphire_2721
•Link to story: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13744467406114805
(PS. I've described what you can expect from the story in a review I've written for it.)
•Genre of the Story: Epic Fantasy, Historical, Cultivation, Female Protagonist
•Any Specific Requests: I'd like to have a cover with a 'revenge' theme on it.
A dark or burning background of Chinese buildings with a Female MC standing in the middle with her back towards us and a sword or needles in one of her hands, preferably in blue robes, but any other colour is fine too, (except red, golden or purple since in my novel those are the colours of royalty).
And thank you so much for doing this.