Hello, I’m new to forums and advertising, so please bear with me. Or help me out if you see I’m doing things wrong.

Anyways, I always liked warping stories from their originals as a sort of ‘what if’. Kind of like how a story would have turned out if things took different turns. That being said, I’d like to hear feedback, and maybe help on improving my writing or storytelling skills.

Here’s a fanfiction I write for fun.

Title: Out of Foxes to Give

Summary: When you’re born as Naruto Uzumaki, mass confusion normally follows. Everything is pretty bad as it can get, but look on the bright side, things can’t get any worse, right?

Wrong.

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12801778505391505

Um, I’ll review other people’s books, too. I just need to figure out how this works...

    Acutelittletrap Sure Forsaken would be happy too, but like the rest of you I am also a fledgling author, so I can only give you my honest opinion. Will reply once I am done reading through your novel.

        Always open for swaps! And no need to sugarcoat it, I'm always happy with criticism as long as it makes sense XD
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12695606606674205/A-story-of-stories

        A story of storie's

        Synopsis:
        When Alice was still a young girl, there was once an old storyteller that visited her village, and Alice had always loved stories. So she asked the old man:
        „What should I do to become like you? Traveling around the villages and telling stories really sounds like fun! I also want to be a storyteller!“

        Only sometime later would she remember what he answered her back then:
        „Being a storyteller isn't fate, it's a destiny. And if fate is a story, then destiny is its end. To become a storyteller, you will first need a story, and the best story is always your own. But your story still hasn't begun just yet.“

        After she left her village, she looked back one last time. Now it was empty, no one lived anymore in the small house where she had lived with her family and the old man that always called her 'little fairy' also wasn't there anymore.

        Looking back she wondered: "Is this the begin of my story? My fate?"

        Edit: I dont know why, but i only seem to get swap requests from from people who write romance, and I'm not that much of a fan of that. (No offense, just personall preference) So plese ask someone else if its a pure romance.
        Thanks!

          PinkCotton I like R-18 haha, I'll review yours. This is mine, it'shttps://www.webnovel.com/book/12475364205548705/I-Just-Want-To-Live-My-Life%3A-Flower-and-You
          It's R-18 too. I suggest you read the synopsis and my warnings. 153 Chapters only. A little bit boring at first but it will be clearer in vol. 2 and 3. Take your time reading it. I can take critism if you give me low star but with a proper reason, please.

              Been reluctant to review swap because I didn't want to force someone to read something they didn't like. However, if anyone's interested in a different read, be grateful to give my story a go.

              I'll R&R yours in turn. Just reply to this post if you're interested to give it a go. I'll get stuck into reading yours :grin:

              Story's Zaldizko. A YA Fantasy boys love with gun fighting, sword fighting, a spider sidekick, magic realism, a gay protagonist who is named after one of the Four Horsemen of Apocalypse (Famine) and set in a Jazzage AU world. In particular in a place called Hell's Labyrinth. It's out there as you can get I guess. It's completed, but you don't have to read it all.

              Bit of trivia. Zaldizko = Horsemen in Basque. Majority of the spells are spoken in Basque. If you speak the language, you'll be able to pickout the catch phrases those "spells" are spelling out XD.

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/12594753605041105

              Oops forgot to mention the story is rated Mature. I understand if it gets skipped.

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