bitterlouise I liked your novel. I think you need to change your cover,
also can you not call MC, a broken shoe in the synopsis especially when she actually went through such a suffering. It left a bad taste in my mouth. Use another word (damaged, degraded, violated, dishonoured, defiled.)
Otherwise, your work is good.

      MiaoMiao11 MiaoMiao11 Thank you.😊 Your novel is also great.
      I couldn't find any good covers though.
      And the term 'broken shoe' seems to have a great impact. Sorry if it kinda insults you or something.😁

            Forsaken1 why end early? i mean the review u said just wrote in the forum. im not into systems novel but urs i can tell was written well

                Eustoma_Reyna

                It is doing worse than a novel, I wrote without editing...

                Even if I write it out people don't like it, and writing something with no readers is very hard.

                All the review people seem to like it, but the truth is it missed the readers, at the end of the day its trash.

                    [unknown] just finished reading a few chapters, will be posting the review tomorrow~

                    @[deleted] Hey, if you're not too busy, I would love to do a review swap with you~ I will start reading the book tomorrow ~

                    Here is a link to my novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12374977605353605/The-Second-Chance-of-a-Lifetime

                    Thank you in advance :heart:

                    (I put this in one comment bc I didn't want to spam XD Hope you guys didn't mind~)

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