bitterlouise I liked your novel. I think you need to change your cover,
also can you not call MC, a broken shoe in the synopsis especially when she actually went through such a suffering. It left a bad taste in my mouth. Use another word (damaged, degraded, violated, dishonoured, defiled.)
Otherwise, your work is good.

    MiaoMiao11 MiaoMiao11 Thank you.😊 Your novel is also great.
    I couldn't find any good covers though.
    And the term 'broken shoe' seems to have a great impact. Sorry if it kinda insults you or something.😁

      Forsaken1 why end early? i mean the review u said just wrote in the forum. im not into systems novel but urs i can tell was written well

        Eustoma_Reyna

        It is doing worse than a novel, I wrote without editing...

        Even if I write it out people don't like it, and writing something with no readers is very hard.

        All the review people seem to like it, but the truth is it missed the readers, at the end of the day its trash.

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