Release That B!tch is a modern romance with the usual sickly sweet moments and misunderstandings, featuring the main characters from Release That Witch.
Roland is the CEO of a tech company. Anna, his crush, works under him. And one of his biggest obstacles, Nightingale, also has a crush on him.
It's been reviewed as having excellent grammar and a rapidly improving story, but I would be grateful for any more feedback you readers can provide.
That novel sucks.....(Congrats by the way)
UnhingedTaboo May I ask in what way it sucks and how you think I could improve it?
That seams like a great novel Donald :ok_hand: :weary: :ok_hand: the best, nothing like those crooked books written by Hillary, she's the worst her books are fake, a complete tragedy, sad, nothing like the trump's, they're the best, it's true.
KidsNextDoor Lock her books up, I say. If I reach first, I guarantee her books will be locked up!
UnhingedTaboo It sucks because it displays the women is bad light... using the word bitch for a women who is actually a witch is sexist!.... So I call for all the women in the world to not vote for this sexist novel written by a misogynistic and racist MAN.
Men are all pigs and no one knows this better than me....(looks at Bill)
UnhingedTaboo All the women in the novel are strong characters, with only two of them having feelings for the MC. Bitch is only used once in the entire novel, and solely for making the pun. I think if you'd actually read the novel, you'd feel differently.
DonaldTrump Dude... I was just trying Hillary roleplay don't take it to heart...... P.S. I actually stay away from fanfiction( just write a story with original character) as they sometimes destroyed the way I used to think about some characters(happened once in Overlord, when skythewood released a fake Volume 10(.... that shit fucked my overlord world).
So I don't read fanfiction, nor will I ever read them... I just came here to congratulate!!
UnhingedTaboo Sorry for missing the joke :sweat: and thank you! :smile:
I can understand not wanting to read fan-fictions; they're very rarely true to the original characters. I'll be the first to admit that the characters' personalities in RTB aren't the same as in RTW; they were more the inspiration for the current characters.
As for writing an original story, I do plan to. I'm following the advice in the Book of Authors and using RTB as my training novel.
DonaldTrump You will be astounded after seeing how many training novel I have written!!... you are pretty god considering that you got in top 3 with just your training novel..!!
UnhingedTaboo If only I'd stayed in the top 3 for longer than 30 seconds...
DonaldTrump This is the most shameless and brilliant advertising I have ever seen :smile:
I shall have my own go
David_Tieku I'm not a famed businessman for nothing.
UnhingedTaboo I don't read fanfiction either for the same reasons.
And Donald, the title put me off from your book big time. I'm against the b word. And the title make it sounds like this is an nsfw book, so please be aware.
LetThereBeMagic Other people have also told me they thought it would be NSFW... I guess that's the price I had to pay for making a brilliant pun.
For this fan fiction contest to launch the same week RTB achieved 3rd is very lucky. Hopefully plenty of readers will vote for me!
DonaldTrump Don't worry, the NSFW title(sadly no content
) attracted plenty of people
Water0202020 I'm glad it attracted some people! I also think I got pretty lucky finding such a good cover image. :slight_smile:
Trump says bump!
Haha, currently its no. 1 at rtw fan fic contest list?
