TallyArtist I think the prologue is good. It would need more spice to make it better (room for improvement) but it sets the tone to the story which is good. You tend to use a lot Kaiden's name to start your paragraph, maybe take note on that too. (Idk, personally the comedy points for me didn't get to me though, *he runs to stay at the center before the exam and the rules of confusion/distraction) but that might just be me).
Will anyone review my story ? I'll do yours too
https://www.webnovel.com/book/quick-transmigration-my-bigshot-brothers-dote-on-me_25182441506382805
This is mine, live a review here , and massage me ^^
Sereinchoo
Yo can you please review mine you seem to have a good grasp on story telling
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Hello, can you review my novel please, I will read yours and write a positive review.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/miss-marvelous-high-school-freshman_25060155905732105
Thank you!
I'm working in next chapter. as soon as I complete, will check out yours
You can check out mine
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TallyArtist I'm interested in a review swap.
This is my book 
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24691573905484205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322669381
I will review yours as soon as you do mine
CoffeePrincess I just added to my collections.
Will review as soon as possible.
This is mine
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24691573905484205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322669381
Destro_ I just added to my collections, I will review as soon as I read it.
Check out mine
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Grace_Harley1 already added, will read later and review it
Grace_Harley1 I'm Done
Grace_Harley1 I'm done
TallyArtist I will also be taking a look at your story. I wish that you do the same for my own.
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CoffeePrincess I just reviewed yours
Mrtin_Monarch I will get back to you tomorrow. I am busy today. If you can, please help to read mine as well. Reviews, comments and collection is appreciated.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/zuomeng-to-dream_24984202306740805
TallyArtist http://wbnv.in/a/c1hRMS5
feel free to drop a review and I would do the same!
Sereinchoo
Done reviewing, it was a good read. Please give me your honest opinion
Anyone up for review and collection swap? Here's my link https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25333407605613505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4323353064
Mrtin_Monarch I have left a review, comments for your story. Honestly, I saw that you repetitively miss the capital letter "I" when writing. There were numerous across the story so I think you need to at least edits those.
The prologue was good but the war I thought it was between Darkness and the other siblings but then in Chapter 1 it was war with the mother, Order. And I got a little confuse on the objective of the war. He was suppose to be Chaos's successor, then he lose the war but he is still the successor, not sure what he is fighting for? Pride? Vengeance for making him weak ? Sorry if I am direct about my review.
I would love to hear your opinion on my own as well! Here's a link to my 1st chapter. There're only 2 chapters so far, but in any case, I'd appreciate it if you can leave a review. Let me know what you think and what I can do to improve my writing in the future chapters. I will check out and review your story as well 
https://www.webnovel.com/book/25374053606032405/68118009885019517?utm_campaign=4320409653
TallyArtist I will do the same with yours as well! So please check out mine too and leave a review/comment
