hello people of the internet, my book's fairly balanced, it's a fantasy story, no harem, or smut stuff, no op main protagonist, it's a classic action fantasy, give it a shot if like those things, and if you do like it leave a review or a comment, I'd appreciate some constructive criticism, in return I too shall do the same.
me book:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-knight-and-the-apocalypse-a-second-chance-at-life_25237216105277705

    Overall I enjoyed it, I like the idea behind the storyline. I would say sometimes it can feel a little over-explaining in dialogue when perhaps the characters thoughts may be more relevant- for example the castles walls having ears.
    My only other comment would be to try to not jump into a new setting too quickly without perhaps having more rationale behind it.
    I am new to writing so I don't doubt that my ideas might not be perfect but they're only my own comments it looks good so far.
    Please have a look at mine I welcome comments http://wbnv.in/a/c4hYByx

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      Synopsis
      In the boring life of teenager Eddie Ito, he has but one wish. "If I only had superpowers, what if I were a superhero. Or something like that". Luckily, a chance with a magical portal whisks him into the legendary world of Altera, and it's country of Marigold. We now get to follow Eddie on his adventure in a new world with powerful magicians, that have a slight penchant for trouble. Through lucrative adventures all the way to save the world from destruction.

          vorlefan Please, if you leave a review/read my story I will do the same to everyone that does it to me. (I will read your entire work, does not matter if it's 5 chapters or 50)
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          Synopsis
          In the boring life of teenager Eddie Ito, he has but one wish. "If I only had superpowers, what if I were a superhero. Or something like that". Luckily, a chance with a magical portal whisks him into the legendary world of Altera, and it's country of Marigold. We now get to follow Eddie on his adventure in a new world with powerful magicians, that have a slight penchant for trouble. Through lucrative adventures all the way to save the world from destruction.

              Lost_void Please, if you leave a review/read my story I will do the same to everyone that does it to me. (I will read your entire work, does not matter if it's 5 chapters or 50)
              This is my webnovel, https://www.webnovel.com/book/marigold-a-new-world_25816475206259105/introduction-karate-tournament._69300881710958990

              Synopsis
              In the boring life of teenager Eddie Ito, he has but one wish. "If I only had superpowers, what if I were a superhero. Or something like that". Luckily, a chance with a magical portal whisks him into the legendary world of Altera, and it's country of Marigold. We now get to follow Eddie on his adventure in a new world with powerful magicians, that have a slight penchant for trouble. Through lucrative adventures all the way to save the world from destruction.

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