Novel Title: Beyond the RIft
I would really appreciate any sort of feedback...
Synopsis: What if you were forced to enter a Rift that gave you superpowers but also turned you into a monster?

After a Calamity that took out a quarter of the Human population, Humanity stood back up, stronger than ever before, and conquered the source of the Calamity.
A few centuries later, in a world governed by Superpowers, Ragnar has lived an adventurous life. From loosing his parents at 7, to serving as an enslaved Assassin till he turned 18, not a single moment had gone by where Ragnar felt bored.
Now that he is 18, he escapes the fate of slavery, only to find out his path ahead had already been decided for him. He does not have the right to choose.

    7 days later

    Hi, I'm open to review swaps, but I need some honest feedback, preferably in paragraph or chapter comments. I know that my novel is lacking, but I can't pinpoint what the problem is (I'm sure it has a lot of issues, but bear with me). If anyone has the time, please help me. Thank you.🙏🙏😁

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    Please read it and let me know what you think.
    Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

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        Unveil the extraordinary in ‘Primordial Sovereign: The Human King’s Dawn’! 📖✨ A tale of power, destiny, and the extraordinary. Don’t miss this epic journey!

        Synopsis

        In a universe teetering on the edge of war and embroiled in chaos, the hierarchy relegates the lesser species to disposable servitude. In the heart of this turbulent existence, a world yearning for dreams, hope, freedom, and love desperately seeks salvation.

        In a realm where mysteries shroud a young man’s forgotten past, he navigates life as part of the lowest tier—the human race—ensnared within the unyielding dominion of higher beings. Despite being perceived as the weakest of his kind, his path is rife with challenges, offering a canvas of extraordinary irregularities and unanswered mysteries.

        Step into the enthralling web novel, ‘Primordial Sovereign: The Human King’s Dawn.’ Follow the struggle for survival interwoven with the quest to reconstruct shattered memories in a world ensnared by its very existence. Along a harrowing odyssey marked by bloodshed, irreversible losses, and heart-wrenching choices, witness his transformation from vulnerability to an unyielding force. Journey with him as he unlocks the enigmatic secrets of the cosmos, disentangling the intricate threads binding the universe, destined to rise and claim kingship among his kind.

        Get ready to embark on a captivating odyssey, woven with prophetic revelations and lurking shadows, unveiling the tapestry of his destiny within a cosmic narrative. An epic saga pulsating with cosmic revelations, and diverse conflicts—be it internal struggles, external adversities, societal clashes, the pursuit of hidden knowledge, or the mystical forces shaping his journey. Moreover, the inherent conflict of ascending to kingship weaves an intricate tale promising an enchanting ride, leaving you yearning for more with each chapter turned. Embark on the immersive odyssey of ‘Primordial Sovereign: The Human King’s Dawn.’

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                  Hi... If you're interested in reading a Female Lead - Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give the book of my friend a read.

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                      Good stuff! So, I've got the first volume of my new book up on WN. Please, I'm hoping to get some good reviews on this volume. Any who read my book, drop me a line, and I'll be sure to read yours.

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                        24 days later

                        If you're a fan of BL transmigration novels, please check out my novel and leave a review to enhance your (or others’) reading enjoyment! You can find it here: http://wbnv.in/a/11i2oUJ.

                          Please review, comment and collect my book
                          Title: After nine years
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                          "I would treat you more than I would to my heart. There's nothing, there's no one that can get close to replacing you in my heart.
                          I love you and I'll never stop loving you."

                          Scarlett Chevalier, the precious princess to her father, became enemies with him when she discovers he's cheating on her mother with her mother's bestfriend.
                          She grows up to be a powerful, vengeful young lady, seeking the downfall of her father and any man that blocks her way.
                          But she would need to find a man that can take care of her and treat her like his own princess.
                          Read after nine years to find out!

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