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Hello there! Can someone possibly provide feedback on my story "His Imaginary Muse", please?
Here's the link:
https://m.webnovel.com/book/his-imaginary-muse_25176718506355905
Looking forward to hearing from you.

Here is my novel link -
https://m.webnovel.com/book/monster-horizion-(-elemon-)_26118266505093905

AHRIMAN not bad

AHRIMAN Synopsis is very well written. One chapter is not enough to judge a book XD

graten Very well written. Just try not to start every sentence with the word 'After' like there was one chapter where you started a sentence with the word 'after' 22-23 times lol.

Well i am a newbie so i am learning and i will improve my writing with every chapter

I have also seen your novel and i liked it very much and i also have some ideas for your novel would you mind listening
TranslatorKun

graten I don't generally but I think this is my discord username xyzabc#3735

I know I am not that new but I do want some feedback and honest review to make my stories better.
Here's two links to my novels in Webnovel. They are both Chinese setting as a background. More towards adventure and action with female leads (FMC).
Links:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/zuomeng-to-dream_24984202306740805
https://www.webnovel.com/book/princess-yuanming_25336870706899205

My chapters are short but it's pretty well-written, so please read my masterpiece, that itself would lessen my depression. UwU
https://www.webnovel.com/book/zero-degrees-celsius_26376860105922105